One Night of Desperate Measures for gottis_chan

[ketchupblood]

For: gottis_chan
Title: One Night of Desperate Measures
Pairing: Tezuka/Fuji
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Set in second year: Inui and Fuji visit a friend of Inui's and end up getting involved in something darker than expected.
Warnings: A little violence and stuff, but nothing worse than what they show you on the Saturday morning cartoons.
Disclaimer: The

Comments

[a1y_puff]

Ooh, that was cool! Like watching some action movie :D

I feel for them, they must've been scared, tho I'm glad it ended nicely. I like the twist in the middle where we thought everything would be okay, Murata turned to be the bad guy, tho if I had squinted from the beginning, the hints were there. Nice job, really. Thumbs up!

p.s. luv the ending! a peck on the cheek is indeed, the best way to say thank you :p

[paranoid_fridge]

Thanks a lot, ne ^^

I hadn't been quite sure whether to actually add that last twist or leave it out, but I reread the beginning and sort of thought "yep, that's a bad guy". ^^

[sasuke_fuji]

I really love the ending. It was so cute.
The plot is very interesting, especially the rescuing part. That is wonderful. You rose my adrenalin up during the fic.. XD I am glad in ended happily.
I just feel the plot was a little too fast in the beginning.

Nice though!! ^^

[paranoid_fridge]

Thanks for reading. ^^

It's interesting you say the beginning moved too fast - I had the feeling the ending came about too sudden. ^^; But since the entire thing was already looooong...

[aoi_aka]

The last line was the best! Nee-san sure knows what's best for Fuji and Tezuka. D

[paranoid_fridge]

Thank you. ^^

Older sisters just *know*/ need to intervene when younger siblings are completely oblivious. ^^