Fic: Not Equal, Yet, Together As One Chapter 4

Jul 26, 2009 15:08


Not Equal, Yet, Together As One
By Chrissy6299

Chapter Four

The next morning, after a few uncomfortable minutes... )

rps, j2, fanfic, big bang

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chrissy6299 July 28 2009, 21:19:29 UTC
:D The end of this chapter totally made you think that Jensen was angry with Jared for saying no. That was my intend, so I'm glad it worked. But I would never make Jensen that mean.

Yep, very convenient that those who make the laws do so with themselves in mind. Sounds, unfortunately, a lot like reality.

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reggie11 February 9 2014, 05:34:03 UTC
Oh God, I feel so sorry for Jared - forced to perform sex acts he doesn't enjoy and he doesn't even get to have them reciprocated. I know Jensen is probably more likely to be upset with Jared for not telling him why he didn't want to but he did come across as angry and that must terribly frightening for someone who knows he has absolutely no rights. What an awful, awful world they live in. You've really done a good job setting up how things work.

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chrissy6299 February 9 2014, 14:45:39 UTC
Thank you!

I know, I felt so mean to Jared while writing this part.

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