Comments | chopchica: SGA Fic: Spill (McKay/Sheppard, NC-17)

chopchica

SGA Fic: Spill (McKay/Sheppard, NC-17)

Jul 28, 2007 22:20

Whee! New porn! New *dirty* porn!

Title: Spill
Pairing: McKay/Sheppard
Rating: NC-17
Length: ~1,300 words
Summary: Rodney sucks in his breath and makes an eeping noise. “But, that’s dirty!” he says, like it’s reason enough.

Notes: Almost everybody in my porn poll voted for spanking, so I got right on that and wrote...watersports. No worries ( Read more... )

porny!, fic, john/rodney, sgafic

Comments 70

shetiger July 29 2007, 05:40:10 UTC

I love this so much. The intimacy is just...gah.

chopchica July 29 2007, 15:01:00 UTC

<333

ladycat777 July 29 2007, 06:20:02 UTC

*swallows against a very dry throat*

Uh. For someone who says she doesn't like reading vaguely d/s and/or control-kink fic... that'd be some of it, right there.

Oh my god, that was so hot. Sooooo hot. And the only version of water sports that doesn't immediately squick me out on general principle. Why so many really, really bad nifty fics involve guys peeing on each other, when they could be doing something like this instead...

Stupid boys.

chopchica July 29 2007, 15:02:05 UTC

Hee! It's still cracking me up that you thought I didn't like it when it's actually one of my favorite things!

And yes! That's the kind of watersports that *totally* works for me (which is why I wrote it, because the world needs more!).

lumenara November 20 2007, 04:17:05 UTC

*is very intrigued*

chopchica November 20 2007, 05:28:19 UTC

Hee! How so?

girlnamedpixley July 29 2007, 06:43:58 UTC

Okay, that um. Yes. I'm totally on board with the whole you-writing-porn-until-your-muse-deserts-you thing. And this worked for me on levels I didn't even know I had. Apparently, I have hidden, kinky depths! Who knew! *g*

chopchica July 29 2007, 15:03:38 UTC

I have hidden, kinky depths too! Hooray!

Hopefully the muse hasn't deserted me yet, cause the Rodney Is Gagged And John Has Fun fic is 95% roughed out already and just needs some hardcore cleaning up.

geeklite July 29 2007, 08:14:58 UTC

I can't believe I read watersports and liked it. I blame John and Rodney. Or you. :)

chopchica July 29 2007, 15:05:14 UTC

Mmm, blame. I can't believe I *wrote* watersports. It's always something I felt neutral about - hot when done right (but that's so rare). It was fun to push myself and write something I don't have any real kink about.

cupidsbow July 29 2007, 08:19:12 UTC

Oh, yeah, that ending is perfect!

chopchica July 29 2007, 15:05:58 UTC

Yay! I was a little worried, but I finally hit the place of, "OMG I JUST WANNA POST THE PORN!" and off it went.