Smile (2/2)

[choon_hee]

Disclaimer : shinee isn't mine :D I only own the plot
Pairing        : 2min
Rating         : Pg 15
Alphabet    : S from My ABC
Summary  : The Doctor said that he will live until next week, Minho only have seven days to spent with his boyfriend. Will a miracle come to them? (sorry lame summary >.<)
A/N              : (1)  So here the end part :D

Comments

[patricialim23]

damn! i hate you for making me cry
but i love you for making this fic..
gosh! this really was a touching story!

thanks! :)

[choon_hee]

O.o Omoo
sorry *wiped your tears*

thank you for liking this fic although it makes you cry >.<

thanks for reading and comment dear

[patricialim23]

i love this part " "I love you Taemin, I love you so much."

"Me too hyung." He hug me back "Love you too much." He buried his head in my chest. I feel his body shaking, like he want to cry.
But he act like a strong one, like he isn't scared. But I know deep in his heart he was crying, scared. "Hyung." His sound get my attention. "What Minnie?" I said warmly but never release the hug. "You love me right?" ask him. "Of course Taemin." I answered with a smile. How can I resist your love. "Than make me yours tonight." I was shocked with his words, my big eyes was open wide. "I want you to be my First and last hyung. I want to give you something, something that I give to someone I really love." He stand in front of me, with a serious look. "I'll do it Taemin for you, only." "

i always remember the part "then make me yours tonight" -

[choon_hee]

I always blushing when read that part >.<
it takes all my soul out :X
cause that's my first time write something like that

but thank you for liking it :D

[hazellicious]

NO. NONONONONONOOOOOOOOOO! *cries and beats her desk*
Taeminnie, don't die, don't go into the white light, stay with Minho! *keeps crying*
This is... Well, depressing. While being sweet. The idea of spending the last day of your life together with the one you love is... So sad. And they even had sex! (Why do you call it a fail? You did pretty well xD)
Anyways, I hope they'll meet again in the afterlife and live happily ever after.
*wipes tears*

[choon_hee]

O(0.0)o don't' cry *wiped your tears*
I hope he didn't die >.<
who know suddenly he wake up again LOL it's scary,
well that's my firts time write a smut scene ><
and I feel its failed +____+
anyways
thank you for reading and comment :D

[lilviplug]

*sob* it's so sad.... T_T

Taeminnie... *sob*

you...you.... this is.... *sob* huwaaaa....

"No hyung.. He just sleep, sleep for a long time. Cause he never die in my heart."

minho-ya..... T_T

i have no idea what to say... it's so.... *sob*

[choon_hee]

*hug you*
I think I make so many people cry =___=
feel bad..
It's hurt me too while writing this fic ;___:
I can't make taemin die like that

[lilviplug]

thank you for the hug... ;)

and don't feel bad... it's great story, that's why you manage to make people cry...

just make taemin die like that only once for awhile..
but not often..

anyway.. great story! :D

[inrin95]

Onnie... ;___;
this fic is so sad..
yet,so beautiful..
taemin, why do you die that fast?! *sobs*
and minho, you jerk, wait for him first! don‘t give up!! ;__;
*brb crying at the corner*

[choon_hee]

Thank you.. :)
Aaaw don't cry *wiped your tears*
he already suffered from the cancer too long dear.. >.<
maybe that's the best..
Minho he's such a strong boyfriend nee?

[choon_hee]

>.> ummm noo..
Lol..
Sowwy *trying to be cute and failed*

he's D-I-E.. :D