Tales of the Abyss, Young!Luke+Young!Guy (Fic) Gift for Moofy

[nubs]

Here's a Christmas gift to my wonderful ohmytea~!
I desperately need to update with some MattHinder, but in the mean time, have some mildly-beta'd BL from The Abyss. A 'Luke gets a cold' tale might follow, if I get some inspiration.

Title: What happens after Luke's first rainy day
Pairing: Young!Guy+Young!Luke
Rating: G
Summary: Luke wanted to know what

Comments

[crystal_chan]

Awww, so cute. X3 The ending was excellent, and seemed to sum up young!Luke and Guy perfectly.

Great job!

[nubs]

Thanks~ Glad you were able to read past my little inconsistencies (I keep correcting stuff right now, actually)

[ladynadiad]

Very cute!

By the way a small typo in the second to last paragraph, "he wouldn't feel bad for making the son of his sword enemy cry over a problem that wasn't even there."

I'm thinking you mean "sworn enemy" there, right?

Also, only way I have found to tab is to not set the editor on the site to html, paste the contents directly from word, then switch over to html coding.

Though if you know more fancy html, there is some code that will do the indents, but the editor will add that in if you paste it from word.

[nubs]

Ahh. Good idea. I just hate how the Rich-text editor deals with LJ-cuts and the like...

Thanks for feedback (and corrections~)!

[ladynadiad]

So do I, it always butchers them along with the lj user code. But if you use it to add all the codes for the indents and then switch to html, you should be fine.

Though you could try putting in the code manually, I admit I tried once and failed miserably (and it takes forever too). Basically, here's what you put in:

< div style="MARGIN: 0in 0in 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 0.5in" > at the beginning of the paragraph

< /div > at the end of the paragraph

Just ditch the spaces before and after the < and >

And that has to be done on every paragraph, which is why copying and pasting from word to the rich text is easier and then switch to html to add stuff like lj cuts and such.

[nubs]

Ah, I see... Thanks 8D