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chokethewind

Fic- The Best We Know How

Feb 14, 2010 13:11

Title: The Best We Know How
Rating: M (language, explicit mentions of sex)
Word Count: 5,443
Summary: Four times Axel left before Roxas woke up, and one time he didn’t. AU, Akuroku.

Author’s Notes: The title comes from the Margot and the Nuclear So and So’s song A Sea Chanty of Sorts. You can download it here.

I feel like I need to apologize for ( Read more... )

kingdom hearts, fanfic, akuroku

Comments 19

icarusfallenx13 February 16 2010, 03:48:56 UTC

You and your epic writing should happen more often

chokethewind February 19 2010, 08:11:52 UTC

Thank you so much. :) I'm so glad this fic worked!

blulightfirefly February 17 2010, 06:13:53 UTC

Wow, fantastic writing style. This was a great read :D

chokethewind February 19 2010, 08:12:19 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad. I was worried about the tenses like nobody's business so I'm happy it appears to be okay! :)

roterstern February 17 2010, 10:59:09 UTC

Agreeing. You and your writing should happen more often.

I love this.

chokethewind February 19 2010, 08:12:43 UTC

I will definitely try to make it happen more often. :) Thank you so much!

quotiety February 20 2010, 21:12:32 UTC

I stopped reading angsty fics a long time ago, because I just can't read them without crying. When I saw the summary for this ficlet, I reckoned it had a good ending and so, I read it.

And hell if I'm not glad that I did.

This was amazing. This is exactly what I love - writing that's more than fanfiction, more than a story. There's no explanation for it, but it's amazing and it never stops being as breathtaking as it is.

Wonderful. Just wonderful. Worth every tear.

chokethewind March 11 2010, 09:24:53 UTC

Sorry for being super late with this comment. I've been out of it.

Thank you for reading this. And for everything you said. <3 You have no idea how much it means to me.

yamiyoru February 23 2010, 11:33:30 UTC

they always say the first story is the best story but is there is a sequel to this?

i want a happier ending. *sob*

nice writing.

chokethewind March 11 2010, 09:25:47 UTC

Sorry for the lateness of this! Been weirdly out of it lately. :)

And no, I don't believe this one has a sequel. I make things too sugary a lot of the times - I think this one must end sad, with nobody dead. :) But sad.

Thank you for reading! <3

yamiyoru March 11 2010, 12:38:50 UTC

thanks for replying. XD

i know what you meant. i often kill my leads too in my past essays.

you write beautifully.

it's okay. i shall imagine it on my own that axel found roxas....