Comments | chocolet89: Not A Dream

chocolet89

Not A Dream

Jan 30, 2012 00:23

Title: Not a Dream
Author: chocolet89
Pairing: Yunho/Jaejoong/Changmin
Rating: NC-17
Length: One-Shot
Genre: Angst, slight!Romance, Smut
Warning: Double Penetration
Summary: They’re in the same country, same city, their accommodations only minutes away from each other even but yet Jaejoong isn't allowed to see them ... or is he?
A/N: The events of ( Read more... )

rating: nc-17, pairing: yunho/jaejoong/changmin, genre: smut, genre: romance, length: oneshot, genre: angst, fandom: dbsk

Comments 19

cc9095 January 29 2012, 14:46:39 UTC

YES! I was waiting for this!!

chocolet89 January 30 2012, 08:09:32 UTC

Hahaha I take it you liked it? XD

cc9095 January 30 2012, 08:12:08 UTC

I liked it and I also like the fact that even though it's angst+smut the end is a little fluffy))

chocolet89 January 30 2012, 08:20:26 UTC

Hehehe yeaa I was originally planning on ending it with more angst but then decided I wanted a semi-happy ending instead ^^
there's too much angst around these days :(

dulanis January 29 2012, 15:34:35 UTC

Hot and sweet. Which was a surprise itself since smut is.... well smutty, not sweet. I loved it :)

chocolet89 January 30 2012, 08:13:39 UTC

Lol I know what you mean XD normally smut is just smut and nothing else right hahaha
Glad you like this and thanks for reading ^^ ♥

snow_meow January 29 2012, 16:44:12 UTC

About time someone wrote a positive fic about all three of them meeting in Shanghai.

chocolet89 January 30 2012, 08:17:35 UTC

Awww yea ikr, I was waiting for someone to write about the three of them meeting up after it was announced they were going to be in Shanghai at the same time LOL but I didn't come across any fics at all so I decided to write a version of my own :3

kamerer220 January 29 2012, 17:20:16 UTC

"It felt like a long time before he finally drifted off to sleep, and when he did, it was to the whispered words of love and comfort in his ears as well as new promises made against his lips and skin."

Favorite line.

chocolet89 January 30 2012, 08:22:52 UTC

Ahh that's my fav part/line too ^^ *hi-fives*

Thanks for reading :D ♥

harunotenshi January 30 2012, 01:23:59 UTC

very nicely written... we all wish for them to be reunited... let's just keep up the hope and faith~^^

they'll be together... soon...

:)

chocolet89 January 30 2012, 08:24:30 UTC

Awww thank you :D

and yep we just gotta continue keeping the faith until they come back together again one day ^^

Thanks for reading and leaving a beautiful comment ♥