Persephone in Hell

Nov 04, 2009 23:31


Fandom: Smallville
Pairing: Chloe/Davis
Rating: R
Summary: Chloe contemplates her motivation for running away with Davis.
Word Count: 3,149

If a man you’ve recently met tells you he’s afraid that he’s a serial killer but doesn’t know for certain because of his blackouts, I suggest you take him at his word. Ignore his chistled beauty. Ignore the ( Read more... )

smallville, fic, chloe/davis

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vagrantdream November 11 2009, 18:43:03 UTC
I was checking out your journal and I just had to stumble across this and a squee a lot.
I mean perspective on beast, chloe/davis dialogue that *works*, sexual tension you could cut with a butter knife. WOAH.

Well, screw Brainiac, screw Jimmy, and absolutely no screwing of Davis, because no matter how compelling the attraction, no alien AI is making me dance its little puppet dance.
Ahaha. Best line ever.I never understood the utter torture Chloe had to go through until now.

“You’re alien by nature, but you’re human by nurture.” I tried to sound encouraging. “When you’re filling out your census forms, you get to call yourself bi-racial.”
hat i love about the character of Chloe is her wit, and you have caught onto this at early season levels, better than the show writers do. XD

My body was a circuit, energy coursing through it. The blood in my veins sparked like a live wire. One touch from him, and I would go up like a flare.
No. Think about baseball.Suffering. Suffering. Suffering. Chloe ( ... )

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You made my week chocolator November 11 2009, 19:18:25 UTC
Hi, Vagrantdream. I just want you to know that your Blogspot site is what led me down the twisty path of Chloe/Davis fanfiction, all the way toward LiveJournal. So in a sense, it's all your fault. Damn you ( ... )

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Re: You made my week vagrantdream November 11 2009, 20:25:57 UTC
Well hi Thea!
Oh, darn me.

I wouldn't have guessed it was you. I love reading your comments on blogspot and passing them on!
And as another discriminating reader, you're welcome! I wanted a rec site for this pairing just so I could keep it all clear for me, and let other people find the gems.

You being a professional editor and writer, I should have guessed. ;)
I can see why you'd be busy. Thank you for writing this one. It made MY day.

(Speaking of Padme/Anakin it has similar aspects, the struggle against Destiny.) Your shipping tastes remind me of me!

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skye718 November 12 2009, 04:48:01 UTC
"Well, screw Brainiac, screw Jimmy, and absolutely no screwing of Davis, because no matter how compelling the attraction, no alien AI is making me dance its little puppet dance.
Ahaha. Best line ever.I never understood the utter torture Chloe had to go through until now." my favourite part - omg, she wants to!

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madluv4mickbeth November 15 2009, 05:35:19 UTC
the awesomely awesome vagrantdream introduced me to this fanfic and i really love it so much... :)

i do hope you continue to write more chlavis fanfics...

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