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chocolatekettle

J is for Jonas (and Jaffa, and Jack) - Alphabet Soup fic

Apr 07, 2010 21:47

Happy Gen Fic Day!

This was the first Alphabet Soup since I discovered Stargate that I felt that maybe I could do, because I haven't seen anything with Vala yet and when it was Jacob's turn I didn't think I knew enough about him. But Jonas! I like Jonas! So I thought, right, go for it, and I had plans of being organised and finished way before the ( Read more... )

sg-1, my fic

Comments 14

resurgamlaura April 7 2010, 22:01:57 UTC

For what its worth, I really like it :) Oh, Teal'c! And poor Jonas, once again dejected and entirely bemused by the SGC's unique proceedings.

chocolatekettle April 10 2010, 19:03:10 UTC

I'm glad you like it, thanks for letting me know :) I always think Jonas is utterly bewildered in the first few episodes!

aelfgyfu_mead April 8 2010, 00:00:41 UTC

Yes, obviously Teal'c likes Jonas: he messes with him!
"O'Neill is uncomfortable with the thought of having an alien on SG-1."

Nice touch at the end having Teal'c point out how many Tau'ri he'd killed himself; Jack never does mention that, does he?

chocolatekettle April 10 2010, 19:06:32 UTC

I don't remember any reference to it. It's an interesting omission; they must have talked about it off-screen at some point.
Teal'c was totallly messing with Jonas with the whole "alien conspiracy" thing :P

sg_betty April 8 2010, 05:11:48 UTC

I like it, too. The voices and the feel of it are just right. All it needs is more. ;) It kind of feels like it's leading up to something, and now I want to know what it is. :)

chocolatekettle April 10 2010, 19:09:07 UTC

Hello! You know, I think that's my problem with it - it's sort of what I wanted to write, but it's not enough. Glad you like it, though :)

sg_betty April 11 2010, 00:00:12 UTC

Very much! :)

samantilles April 8 2010, 19:54:03 UTC

You really got snarky!Jack's voice down right!! I appreciate how Teal'c uses as little necessary to make Jack outhink himself to the decision we know he's going to make. And I adore that Jonas is just so upset that he can't enjoy the real weather and instead watches it on TV!!

chocolatekettle April 10 2010, 19:09:52 UTC

Hee, thank you. His fascination with the weather channel is adorable.

ansostuff April 9 2010, 22:13:35 UTC

Nice. You've voiced some of the thoughts I think Teal'c has about Jonas. :) I liked this. :)

chocolatekettle April 10 2010, 19:10:31 UTC

I'm glad, thanks for letting me know!