Five things Jack loved and lost

Jul 20, 2009 02:39

A random five things. The quick and dirty result of my moping for the poor wee broken 'puter of which I am quite fond,  really. Despite the incredibly loud fan and the awful audio and the battery that lasts for almost two whole minutes.

Title : Five things Jack loved and lost
Rating : G, I'll say
Word count : 620

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Jack fell in love with flying  at an ( Read more... )

sg-1, five things, my fic

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jeanniewal July 21 2009, 07:08:50 UTC
Very good. And I agree about saving Adam Baldwin to become Jayne. In fact, I can see amazing crossover AUs unfolding before me here...wheee!

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chocolatekettle July 21 2009, 09:53:36 UTC
Heehee, already thought of that. Just think of all the arguing and hilarity that would ensue should SG1 meet the crew of Serenity...
Glad you liked!

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antares04a July 24 2009, 21:29:17 UTC
Very nice.
My favourite line was: "When he loses Daniel again after that, Jack tries to think of him as being merely misplaced. He'll turn up eventually. Probably when Jack is looking for something else."

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chocolatekettle July 28 2009, 23:05:59 UTC
Glad you liked it :)

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hilde September 22 2010, 08:48:58 UTC
This was lovely! I loved the third one :) Thank you!

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chocolatekettle September 27 2010, 17:09:03 UTC
I'm glad you liked it, thanks for letting me know your favourite!

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zinke September 22 2010, 13:20:29 UTC
Here via stargateficrec. This is just lovely. I especially love #4 and this line: Because maybe if he doesn't have to see it every day he won't miss it so much.; there's just so much truth in it and it really packs an emotional punch.

Well done!

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chocolatekettle September 27 2010, 17:10:43 UTC
Thank you! I haven't actually seen season 8 yet so I don't know what reason was given for Jack leaving, but this seemed plausible :)

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penknife September 22 2010, 16:46:03 UTC
Oh, very nice!

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chocolatekettle September 27 2010, 17:11:00 UTC
thank you, glad you liked!

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