Comments | chocolate_muse: [FIC]: Undertow (Dean/Tessa, Adult)

nyoka in chocolate_muse

[FIC]: Undertow (Dean/Tessa, Adult)

Jan 12, 2011 12:15

[Undertow]
SPN. Dean/Tessa. R. ~660 words. Pornlet. Post 6.11.

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genre: het, pairing: dean/tessa, fandom: supernatural, type: one-shot

Comments 24

elanurel January 12 2011, 22:10:58 UTC

Oh... Just, oh...

And then there's this: filling her with his life and his death and every desperate moment inbetween.

Which is more than just "oh..."

Gods, but this is beautiful. The language. The rhythm. The pairing.

nyoka January 15 2011, 16:39:12 UTC

Oh, Branni, now you have me blushing. I'm so glad this piece worked for you, bb. This pairing is so beautiful to me, and I'm so happy that you enjoyed this little exploration into them.

Thank you for reading hon! <3

geckoholic January 12 2011, 23:05:41 UTC

Wonderful! Sexy and poetic and well written. And I love the descriptions of the scars.

nyoka January 15 2011, 16:40:08 UTC

Thank you so very much for reading and commenting! I'm so thrilled you enjoyed this, especially the language and description!

Thanks again! <3

hezio2 January 13 2011, 00:58:27 UTC

Beatifully written. Loved it. Love how they need each other.

nyoka January 15 2011, 16:41:00 UTC

Thank you so much for reading and for your kind words! I'm so incredibly excited you enjoyed this piece! <3

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nyoka January 15 2011, 16:41:44 UTC

They really are so fascinating, aren't they? Thank you for reading and commenting -- I'm so glad you enjoyed my little exploration here! <3

dotfic January 13 2011, 02:15:34 UTC

Oh, this, yes. This is lovely.

nyoka January 15 2011, 16:42:13 UTC

Thank you Dot! I'm so happy you enjoyed this <3333