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Aug 08, 2008 23:33


There were just too many of them.

I knew  our little ragtag band of rebels, talented though they were, were no match for the seemingly endless supply of Dai Li that continuously poured into the caverns of Ba Sing Se at an alarming pace. I think to myself, I'm only human. I can't keep this up forever.

As if the blind earthbender could read my thoughts ( Read more... )

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soulfulsin August 9 2008, 04:11:25 UTC
Nice beginning, even though it's all in italics.

Someone commented on my The Conspirators story with a penname "Chocoholic10" and I did a double take. It was too close to yours.

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