Comments | choclitbunny: For lack of a better term, "quasi-girl!porn"

choclitbunny

For lack of a better term, "quasi-girl!porn"

Feb 27, 2008 00:52

Change of address! Fic is now over at goldinvein.

Bisexual Tendencies

Comments 13

notfarfromhome February 27 2008, 06:23:38 UTC

OHMYGOD OHMYGOD OHMYGODDDD

YOU CANNOT END IT THERE OH MY GOD SO CRUEL

But, um, yes. HOTTEST EVER? PRETTY MUCH. Unnnnggghhh. I love how you made it MORE than porn and wrote it from Haley's perspective and the details and HOLY GOD DID I MENTION IT BEING THE HOTTEST EVER?

<3 iluuuu. There is no way I could possibly top this but damnit I totally have to write some girl!Spence/Haley now.

notfarfromhome February 27 2008, 06:25:34 UTC

ALSO! FOR THE RECORD! That was totally some of the hottest girl porn I've ever read, no lie. I want like a million more pages of it haha but yes. You rock so hard. \o/

choclitbunny February 27 2008, 06:33:40 UTC

\o/

So glad it turned it well. :DDD I swear, I have a complex about my smut. My brain is like, IT'S NOT HOT ENOUGH. WRITE MORE UNAPOLOGETIC, GRAPHIC DETAILS! And so I do. XD

OMG, I had to do it from Haley's POV. For some reason, doing it from Spencer's just didn't give the full effect. AND I <3 HALEY. SO IT'S ALL GOOD.

But, no really, I'M SO GLAD YOU LIKED IT. <333

melish March 9 2008, 10:43:49 UTC

She swallowed and finally said, “Never have a sleepover and practice kissing with your friends.”

Spencer looked stunned for a moment, and the next, it was like he was on the verge of cracking up. “Too late.”

LOL OH MY GOD SOULMATES. AHAHA.

THAT WAS AMAZING. And, uhm. Hot. Ilu! <33333

a hot spark went up his spine and nestled in her gut. is that meant to say her* spine? :DDD

choclitbunny March 9 2008, 16:47:31 UTC

AREN'T THEY, THOUGH?! OMG. SPENCER + HALEY 4EVER!

Oops. Thanks for pointing that out. *fixes*

sceaterian March 9 2008, 18:04:14 UTC

Hello, I jumped here on lizzilupin's suggestion and so glad I did! That was intensely hot. Using Haley's pov was brilliant! So what changed the others back? Was it the sex? Did Jon and Brendon experiment with each other and that's what turned them back so quick? Will it happen again and again so that Haley has the best of both worlds? I kinda don't want this story to end.

ecarnation June 11 2008, 05:28:19 UTC

You made fic! Um, I'm not going to read it now I'm going to save it for later. :D