i feel so indescribably wonderful right now, you don't even know.
I've been waiting for this, and, god, i am so impatient that i couldn't even wait when i saw these here. and I'll read them again and again until the final comes out, and then I'll read it again and again as well.
maybe, sometime soon, i can actually formulate some coherent thought other than just--gah, because i would really like to actually point out all of the things in this that made me ache and smile, but right now it all just blurs together like everything and nothing at all.
Okay, This> “I did it for you,” Brendon breathed. Ryan whispered back, “I know.” > is why I love you. There are seriously no words I could use to tell you how happy this story made me. I loved it completely and totally. Anything you write is always amazing and this is no exception. I can't wait to read it again. And again. With my tendency towards obsession this could get ugly fast. <3 <3 <3
Oh, and your Ryan was sooo precious. He was very different from most Ryans out there, but in a good way. He was still Ryan, you know? Ok, I'm completely on a high now, whether its from this amazing story or the crack that Jon brought me, I don't know.
You already know how much I adore this. I love your description, your characterizations, your dialogue, the smut... Good for you for finishing it! This is such an amazing story that I know I'll enjoy reading over and over again. The hottest smut EVER, seriously. I love you :):)
Ok, so maybe I got too caught up in reading to actually comment on every part :)
This was freaking awesome- in oh so many ways! And I'm actually kinda honored to get to read it before the final polish. It's epic. I cannot begin to really give you a more intelligent comment than that. I have the Death today- but this made me feel all warm and squishy <3 So thank you.
I've never been so happy that I didn't have any really exciting plans on a Saturday night, because it meant that I got to enjoy this. I'm still trying to take it all in and I'm sure I will have more specific comments as soon as I have time to read it again.
The sex was particularly amazing. I loved when Brendon referred to "I love you" as it. That made me smile. (at least I hope that's what he meant, if not, I'm just going to pretend it was) Also, and this is kind of out there but, I really liked Ryan lying about having fingered himself before. Probably because I'm a perv, but that was strangely hot.
I honestly think that the best compliment I can give on this story is that these characters are going to live in my head from now on. I'm sure there will always be things that I remember about this story and I love when that happens -- so much!!
So glad you liked it! This fic has become so special to me, and I'm really glad that other people love it and understand it and connect with it like I wanted them too.
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I've been waiting for this, and, god, i am so impatient that i couldn't even wait when i saw these here. and I'll read them again and again until the final comes out, and then I'll read it again and again as well.
maybe, sometime soon, i can actually formulate some coherent thought other than just--gah, because i would really like to actually point out all of the things in this that made me ache and smile, but right now it all just blurs together like everything and nothing at all.
:)
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This>
“I did it for you,” Brendon breathed.
Ryan whispered back, “I know.”
> is why I love you.
There are seriously no words I could use to tell you how happy this story made me.
I loved it completely and totally.
Anything you write is always amazing and this is no exception.
I can't wait to read it again. And again.
With my tendency towards obsession this could get ugly fast.
<3 <3 <3
Oh, and your Ryan was sooo precious. He was very different from most Ryans out there, but in a good way. He was still Ryan, you know?
Ok, I'm completely on a high now, whether its from this amazing story or the crack that Jon brought me, I don't know.
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Um, *points to five page long email*
You already know how much I adore this. I love your description, your characterizations, your dialogue, the smut... Good for you for finishing it! This is such an amazing story that I know I'll enjoy reading over and over again. The hottest smut EVER, seriously. I love you :):)
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This was freaking awesome- in oh so many ways! And I'm actually kinda honored to get to read it before the final polish. It's epic. I cannot begin to really give you a more intelligent comment than that. I have the Death today- but this made me feel all warm and squishy <3
So thank you.
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I'm still trying to take it all in and I'm sure I will have more specific comments as soon as I have time to read it again.
The sex was particularly amazing. I loved when Brendon referred to "I love you" as it. That made me smile. (at least I hope that's what he meant, if not, I'm just going to pretend it was)
Also, and this is kind of out there but, I really liked Ryan lying about having fingered himself before. Probably because I'm a perv, but that was strangely hot.
I honestly think that the best compliment I can give on this story is that these characters are going to live in my head from now on. I'm sure there will always be things that I remember about this story and I love when that happens -- so much!!
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PS - Yes, it was "I love you." :D
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