[poem]KILLING ME WITH A GLANCE

[choclavenderjm]

KILLING ME WITH A GLANCE

It started with just a brush in my bum

It was sure like you added a hum

There is no one around us and you made a quick touch

Only to feel me weak; it made my eggs hatch.

Slow strokes became erratic and bolder

The movie became so uninteresting when they looked at me like a hooker;

My moans are subdued as the speed increases;

The

Comments

[anihimesama]

What a naughty poem XD

kekeke

[choclavenderjm]

thanks~

[jaceni]

Annie was right. The poem is a little xxx. XD

But I liked these stanza's:

They said I am crazy in love with a stranger

I told them I love to place my life in danger;

As long you will be assigned as my killer;

I really, REALLY liked them. ^__^ I kinda got a little confused on the rest, but just imagined jaemin for it and that it was Jae the one saying it. :) Thanks for letting me know about it. :) I normally don't care for poems, but the stanza's I quoted were really nice. :D See ya bb. ^^

yeyness

[choclavenderjm]

it's my first time to write a naughty poem! it can be interchangeable..but most of the time its applicable to jae. lol. thanks sensei!

[jessasaddiction]

LOL
Is this a hint of a JaeMin/MinJae one night stand? LOLOLOL!
I don't know why but I really liked these last lines

They said I am crazy in love with a stranger

I told them I love to place my life in danger;

As long you will be assigned as my killer;

I am ready for this change as my life became wilder.

Such a dark type of love is one of my weakness xD
Loved this one ate... ♥

wishin and hopin

[choclavenderjm]

hehehehe jae would love to say that