Comments | choc_fic: Fic: Not Safe With Anybody Else (SGA, Ronon/John, R)

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Fic: Not Safe With Anybody Else (SGA, Ronon/John, R)

Feb 17, 2008 11:28

Not Safe With Anybody Else
Author: telesilla
Fandom/Pairing: SGA, Ronon/John
Rating: R
Word Count: 1,543
Disclaimer: The SGA characters do not belong to me. Duh.
Summary: Sheppard's hiding himself away from his team and Ronon wants to know why.

Notes: The main notes contain spoilers, so they're after the fic. My choc_fic prompt was: Ronon gen or Ronon/any: ( Read more... )

ronon dex/john sheppard, stargate: atlantis, telesilla, ronon dex, february 16

Comments 33

crysothemis February 17 2008, 20:16:47 UTC

Ooooh, I really enjoyed this. The tension between Sheppard's self-control (just on the edge of breaking, which captures his character and the episode perfectly) and Ronon's loyalty, comprehension, and desire is just delicious.

I actually really liked the way it ended (and was glad not to have been spoiled). Although I will confess that I want to see if Ronon ever does get what he wants . . .

telesilla February 18 2008, 06:46:24 UTC

Thank you! I love that episode and I really wanted to explore Ronon dealing with John not just being a bug but also being so on the edge in a way that Ronon had never seen.

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telesilla February 18 2008, 07:53:26 UTC

Thank you! That's one of my favorite eps and it was a lot of fun to try to figure out how Ronon would deal with John in this state. Aside from, you know...shooting him. :)

anatsuno February 17 2008, 21:00:12 UTC

Ooh, I like this. It's very atmospheric, and very sexy and dark for something that doesn't actually go there. I think I wasn't expecting the twists and turns of it, but I liked them all a lot.

anatsuno February 17 2008, 21:01:01 UTC

(the way all the comments start the same is cracking me up, heee)

telesilla February 18 2008, 08:08:55 UTC

Thanks! To be honest, I wasn't expecting half the twists and turns either. *grins*

And yeah I had noticed that about the comments. :)

ladyoflisquill February 17 2008, 21:50:29 UTC

"I have marks and scars from a lot of really bad things that have happened to me. Wouldn't mind having one or two from something good."

I want him to have them too. Never really saw the whole John/Ronan thing but this totally made sense. Would love to see more.

telesilla February 18 2008, 08:45:09 UTC

Thank you! I really do like Ronon/John as a pairing, but then I also like Ronon/Rodney and John/Rodney and so on. *grins*

ladyoflisquill February 18 2008, 20:53:06 UTC

LOL! Yes I see your point. ::wanders off smiling::

ltcoljsheppard February 17 2008, 22:48:27 UTC

Yeah..... I'm starting to see the John/Ronon thing more and more too.

Nicely done. A lot of suspense in this little bit. Very enjoyable. Nicely done.

- JS

telesilla February 18 2008, 09:59:04 UTC

They make an interesting pair; they're similar but in different ways than John and Rodney are similar, which makes them a lot of fun to write.

Glad you liked this! :)