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Grain by Grain by Grain [Avatar: The Last Airbender, Sokka & Katara, G]

Feb 16, 2008 23:49

Title: Grain by Grain by Grain
Author: voleuse
Rating: G
Word count: 520 words
Summary: In life I paid relentlessly what the god of fire charged me.
Notes: Set during S2
Prompt: Avatar: The Last Airbender, Sokka & Katara: traditions - There are certain Water Tribe traditions they follow wherever they go.

( Against Sokka's occasional protests, they stopped to rest at noontime. )

sokka, katara, voleuse, avatar: the last airbender, february 16

Comments 6

marycrawford February 17 2008, 11:13:16 UTC

Aw, that was lovely. I love the give-and-take between them, and the ritual in the last scene feels just right.

voleuse February 18 2008, 18:07:42 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it.

anenko February 17 2008, 13:03:54 UTC

This was gorgeous. I loved all the small but meaningful traditions that play out in these scenes, and how natural it all is. The last segment was especially touching.

voleuse February 18 2008, 18:08:00 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

marag February 17 2008, 13:40:30 UTC

Very sweet. I liked the rituals.

voleuse February 18 2008, 18:08:16 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.