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used_songs September 13 2007, 21:29:43 UTC
Thank you!

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Re: Falling hohaiyee September 13 2007, 17:53:38 UTC
This is angsty, but at least they are holding each other at the end of it.

Bashir's first time, well, I kinda got squicked when he started talking about his childhood after that, it wasn't /that/ horrible was it?

...or does The First Time, in this title, refers not so much as to the virginity that Garak expected, but the first time they were just together?

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Re: Falling used_songs September 13 2007, 21:27:49 UTC
Just first time together. I figured neither one of them would be virgins.

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katesnotes September 13 2007, 21:05:37 UTC
I've really missed these two - thank you so much for writing them. I love what you have done with them here. They are both fascinating monsters. Both alien to each other and to the world in general. This is just gorgeous work - thank you again.

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used_songs September 13 2007, 21:28:49 UTC
Thank you for the feedback and praise. They are my favorite pair.

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nyssa23 September 15 2007, 04:51:08 UTC
I've got to say, I didn't think I would like this at first, but I loved the way it got very dark very quickly. I imagine there's more than a little darkness behind Julian's ready smile, but what really sold this for me was your portrayal of Richard Bashir: a man who knows he's pissed away his life trying to vicariously capture success by pinning every hope he has on his child. Excellent work.

P.S. Much love on the Enterprise/Starry Night icon.

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used_songs September 15 2007, 10:40:18 UTC
Thank you! I know my Richard isn't very canon, but I always imagine him this way. And after the Dominion prison and the revelations about his enhancements, I always saw Julian's smile as deception.

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inalasahl September 16 2007, 14:58:51 UTC
Aw, I really enjoyed this. Nicely angsty.

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used_songs September 16 2007, 22:38:04 UTC
Thank you!

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