Fate's Twisted Sense of Humor [5/?]

May 09, 2011 22:06

Title: Fate's Twisted Sense of Humor
Pairing: Chloe Sullivan and Oliver Queen
Chapter: Chpater 4 (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7026704/5/Fates_Twisted_Sense_of_Humor)
Fandom: Smallville
Rate: PG-13
Summary: Even though it happened by mistake, Chloe could never regret it. Not knowing who gave her, her most precious gift, Chloe is about to find ( Read more... )

character: lois lane, character: carter hall, character: courtney whitmore, multi-chapter, show: smallville, character: connor queen, character: chloe sullivan, character: oliver queen, character: mia dearden, fanfiction, character: clark kent, character: arthur curry

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serafina19 May 9 2011, 22:00:59 UTC
Actually tried to get my client error on purpose on my journal, but it didn't work, so probably good just to stick to your plan.

As for the story, this was a cute chapter in regards to the whole Courtney-Mia-Conner outing, but it was also laced with a bittersweet feel with Chloe's dad's condition.

I'll be curious to see where you take the storylines from here.

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chlollielover May 13 2011, 04:34:29 UTC
Yes, Chloe's life is about to get a little more drama in the next chapter because of her Dad, and I have more Court-Mia-Connor moments in store with Bart added to the mix.

Glad you like it :)

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flyswithnowings May 9 2011, 22:02:03 UTC
Agh! Poor Chloe, I totally wouldn't know what to do in that situation.
And then Ollie trying to make sure she was alright and her spacing.
Bad Gabe, bad. I don't understand how people can do that to their kids, sure they screw up but hey! they're still your kid!

The Mia/Connor/Courtney interaction made me giggle, I love how protective Chloe is about Connor and how everyone knows the two girls are going to give him things his mom doesn't give him.
And Carter's astute observation, very nice ;)

Can't wait to see more!

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chlollielover May 13 2011, 04:36:37 UTC
Ollie and Chloe proximity will grow because of the little drama that it's expecting our Watchtower.

Mia/Connor/Courtney will be a present thing on the story. I just love put the kids altogether (including Bart) and drive the "parents" (our Chlollie of course) crazy. Eheh.

Carter will be even more astute in the future. ;)

Thanks for the comment! <3

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danisige May 9 2011, 22:12:11 UTC
The unfolding of the story is more and more intriguing.

Butterflies in her stomach ... awww, Chloe. Oliver messes with her ​​and he gets very worried about her.:D

The interaction of Mia / Connor / Courtney is very funny.

Great chapter. :)

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chlollielover May 13 2011, 04:37:39 UTC
Oh yes, he messes with her and she will start to realize that on the next chapter.

Awww...I'm like all of you like our little trio!

Thanks for the comment, I'm glad you like it :D

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iluvaqt May 9 2011, 22:32:25 UTC
The three part didn't bother me at all. I only would have complained if it wasn't this length :D

I loved reading Carter again. And the twist with Chloe's Dad and opportunity for Oliver to be the supportive friend, great!

Mia and Courtney watching Connor, I'm sure they had a blast, and I think there'd be some baby crushes on these gorgeous teens watching over him too. :)

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chlollielover May 13 2011, 04:39:19 UTC
Believe me, my chapters are pretty long. Especially the next two or so...

Carter will appear again soon, I like him and I don't intend to kill him anytime soon like the show did (hated SV for that...).

Chloe's Dad will have a very smart observation on the near future. Just stay tuned. ^^

Glad you like it <3

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abarbiestory May 9 2011, 22:57:22 UTC
loved it!!!!!

Ollie being supportive
Lois being nosey
of course Carter would notice that Con looked like "someone" he knows!!
and breakfast with the fam!! WHat more could you want!!

can't wait for an update! oh and the 3 parts didn't bother me. Although i was a lil worried the first part was that short I wanted to read more lol!!!

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chlollielover May 13 2011, 04:41:58 UTC
Carter is a smart man. He'll get there soon enough...eheh.

I'll update as soon as I can.

I'm glad you like it <3

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