o bring on the jealious ,confuse ,emontional ollie :) ooo as much i like hal i so want ollie ..to kick his butt ) sorry i am a died heart chlollie lover) yea ollie ur jackass u ran away like a bigbaby now hal got tth e girl .lol cant for update :) intresteing writing i love it :)
Ok seriously hun YOU HAVE TO UPDATE!!! But of course study comes first. Don't let me misguide you. I'd feel horrible. ZOMG! Firstly, the whole Chloe and Hal relationship is really cute. But I kinda feel bad for the guy considering Chloe is most likely going to leave him in the end for Ollie. Secondly, Ollie's still a bit of a jackass, and I mean that in the nicest way possible. Sadly, as cute as Hal is, Ollie is her true love...well he will be as soon as he gets his act together. Tool. Lol at Ollie hiding in the bushes like a creepy stalker (although I must say I wouldn't mind him stalking me ;D). He better charm the panties off of that woman with grovelling, sexy fist fights (although its not all that charming, but still fun and sexy to watch...especially if they were both shirtless...), and endless declarations of eternal love and worship. Kick ass chapter with a bitch of cliffhanger (also meant endearingly. There must be cliffhangers. They are to a good fanfiction as evil laughter is to the dark side). God I'm such a ramber. To
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Great chapter. It's all coming together. TI's nice to see Chloe happy. I like how Hal is. It would be interesting if the Green Lantern starts working with JL. And yep, jealously will do it everytime Ollie is going to have to see just what he is missing.
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so instead, I'll just say, "ditto."
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cant for update :) intresteing writing i love it :)
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