Fated Consequences Chapter 3

[chlollielove4]

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[x_girl_wonder_x]

Evil! Eviiiiiiiiil!

You just had to end it there, didn't you? Argh! Cliff-hangers are my kryptonite.

Haha! Great chapter, as usual, of course!
I'm seriously all excited for Present-Ollie's reaction. I mean, really, it's not cheating-cheating. It's just Chloe saying, "hey, Ollie, you're going to be twice as hot in the future!" (man, I'm superficial)
He's going to age well, so really, he should be happy,right? Right?!
This is the best love triangle ever!!!! Hehehe.

Until next time,

Stephanie

[chlollielove4]

Hahaha yup, my middle name is Evil haha :D.

Thank you so much that means so much. Haha exactly. He will be a gorgeous man when he ages.

Aw thanks :D

[abarbiestory]

OMG!!!!!!!!!! nice ending!!!! lol

sorry I didn't comment on the last chapter *puts head down in shame*, RL and school have been crazy so I apologize!

great update! i love that they were sharing little kisses and touches! It must be kindda weird for chloe though lol!

I can't wait to see what P!Oliver says/thinks!!! hes going to be so confused and pissed lol!

[chlollielove4]

Aww thanks :D. Glad you liked the ending, I like cliffhangers and that was a perfect one imo.

Aww it's fine, don't worry about it. I know what it is like to be crazy busy. I go to school full-time and work full-time so it's okay :).

Thanks again.

[amber611]

OMG Awesome chapter, I LOVED it!!!!!! Short yes, but still AMAZING!!! :D Did I mention how much I absolutely LOVE this fic??!!! :) Cause I SOOOOO DO, and I'm totally addicted to it now!!!!! :D I absolutely LOVED the Chlollie banter, and the flirting too, you did a Perfect job on them!!! :D You really nail writing the characters!! Plus OMG Present!Ollie, OMG cannot believe you left it there, GAH!!!!! :) I definitely Can't Wait to read more to see what happens next!!!!! :D Again, AMAZING fic and job so far!!!!! :D

[chlollielove4]

Awwww thanks :D. Haha yeah sorry for it being so short, I was just not at my best, but thanks.

Awwwwww wow am I blushing? I think so hehe. I'm sooo excited and happy you like it so much. Wow that is such a compliment that you think I am writing them perfectly, I always get scared I don't do such a good job so thank you.

Thanks again

[itsjust_xchar]

I was waiting to see if they would get caught and they did! I love the way you have written them. I can't wait for the next installment. This is wonderful so far

[chlollielove4]

Aww thank you :D. That is such a big compliment I am flattered.

Thanks again!

[chlollielover]

OMG they did get caught!!!!!
I'm so excited for the next chapter. This one was so great!!!!

I'm loving this story so much! <3