Of Characters & Rewriting

[chloe_cappucino]

I was thinking about Percy and Felicity and the way the characters keep evolving. Percy Carabinieri (yes, she has a last name) is becoming darker, with a hint of insanity about her. Her personality changed from outgoing to introverted after her piano teacher raped her. Nor does she fear death, there are times when she would welcome it. A hint of

Comments

[litaanderson]

So far, so good. I kinda feel sorry for her.

[chloe_cappucino]

Thanks, still think I'm getting wordy. But it's already better than the original. Ah.