Drabble-ganza 2 - #44 Fred/Cordy/Angel

Jul 28, 2007 12:04

For strangecreature. Somewhere around 300 words. She couldn't decide so we agreed on something Cordy/Fred-ish. :) I decided to make it a pretty threesome and give her Fred/Cordy/Angel for ( Near )

my fic, series: drabble-ganza 2, angel/fred/cordelia

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dancinbutterfly July 28 2007, 19:55:30 UTC
Omg me?

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dancinbutterfly July 28 2007, 19:58:24 UTC
Ryan/Seth - Fixing the wedding in the finale montage(if you've seen it, you know what I mean, if you dont....not TOO spoilery)

If you havent seen the finale then....

George/Rube

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chlare July 29 2007, 02:36:56 UTC
I haven't seen much of the fourth season if that's the finale you mean. :P So George/Rube it is.

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strangecreature July 28 2007, 23:22:10 UTC
Aw. Your Fred point of view is lovely and breaks my heart a little. Silly Fred, indeed! I love how she almost comes across as in awe of them... Very true to a fresh-from-Pylea Fred. :-)

She’d felt wild and sensuous, like big, waxy lilies and sticky, redolent honeysuckle made up her body as his muscles and bone rolled against her, smooth, perfect skin loving her and making her feel it so deep.

Gah! You with the sexy writing! You've definitely got a way of finding that line between erotica and poetry that works so damn well.

Thank you, thank you! I quite enjoyed my triple-sized drabble! :-D

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chlare July 29 2007, 02:31:43 UTC
Yay, you caught that! Definitely fresh-from-Pylea Fred. :) She's so awestruck by everyone in those early days.

Thank yoo! Love it when stuff like that happens. Sometimes you just *know* how a character feels and you know there's got to be a perfect way to describe it... thus the somewhat random lyrical waxing. ;)

You're so welcome! *hugs!*

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dreamincolor September 3 2008, 09:24:03 UTC
Very nice, especially your Fred. She was so sweet and nervous, and insecure - just like early Fred was, especially in company of the two people she probably felt were almost godly next to her.

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chlare September 4 2008, 01:20:30 UTC
Thank you. I really liked how this one turned out, so doubly thank you. Fred is fun to write, so much going on in that head of hers.

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