The Vegas RPS extravaganza. DB/AD, NC-17

Aug 25, 2005 00:13

Unrelated to any previous DB/AD RPS.
Disclaimer: This is fiction. I don't own these guys, and no harm is intended to them or the locations mentioned.

It’s All a Gamble )

my fic, fic: pwp, david/alexis, fic: rps

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strangecreature August 27 2005, 04:24:36 UTC
Oh! Very neat style to this piece ... loved the Vegas-esque soundbytes in brackets! Also thought the slide from light, if intense fun, to something more serious and scary at the end. I like when that aspect of reality is touched upon in rps, although you'd already done a wicked good job of working that in with Alexis' subconcious reaction to the tattoos. :)

And hello! Hot! *G* You do rps so damn well.

I spy with my little eye ... an author cameo? *points and grins*

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chlare August 27 2005, 05:31:56 UTC
Thanks! *snuggles* Thank you, thank you. :) *waves*

Yes, yes, I couldn't help it. "Flashing neon sign, look here's me!" :D I was there, I saw them damnit. I just didn't know it. I wasn't Mary Sue-ing Alexis, I swear. :)

I was so not waiting for you to comment on this. ;D

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sweptawaybayou April 14 2006, 00:33:23 UTC
Brilliant. Truly.

So many little pieces that I could pick out, but really, this is one that I am going to save and reread a couple of times. I wrote David/Chris in Vegas after the first writercon. It is a fun place to set stories.

:)

Very nicely done.

*hugshugs*

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chlare April 14 2006, 19:25:19 UTC
Thank you. *blushes*

What a compliment. :) It *is* a fun place to set stories; it's so fucking bizarre and it feels like normal rules don't apply there, so rps just *works* there. Glad you enjoyed it. :) *hugs*

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