It's Complicated (But Only From a Certain Viewpoint) [1/1]

Oct 14, 2010 22:30

Title: It’s complicated (But Only From a Certain Viewpoint)
Fandom: Hawaii Five-0
Pairing: Steve/Danno 
Summary: Steve and Danno are married. Kind of. In which there are (incorrect?) speculations as to the marital status of Steve and Danny that they deny but are (unhelpfully) contributing to.
Warnings: There's no spoilers but I wrote a majority of this ( Read more... )

rating: pg-13, steve/danno, hawaii five-0, fanfiction, word count: 5001 - 10000

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huntress69 October 19 2010, 04:39:15 UTC
(Hums The Wedding March)....So married and everybody knows it. And the supermarket scene had me ROFL!! Nice job.

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chiuonthat October 19 2010, 04:54:47 UTC
Hehe... they totally are. I'm glad you liked it. :)

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megan_moonlight October 19 2010, 05:08:34 UTC
OMG, it was just PERFECT <3 I just woke up and now I can't stop smiling XDDDD
Thank you so much for that!
he fic was amazing! I loved scene with Gracie and the one in the supermarket <3 And Steve didn't get laip XDDDD Seriously, I can't stop grinning. WOnderful job on Kono and Chin, too! It all works so well together! 8D
I love it!

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chiuonthat October 19 2010, 12:29:08 UTC
/blushes

Thank you! It makes me happy to know something I wrote managed to start your day off with a bang.

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grnidshrk October 19 2010, 05:27:12 UTC
OO, you gunna make a sequel? It'd be awesome! plus, I just love these two together and you did this fabulously

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chiuonthat October 19 2010, 12:35:56 UTC
A sequel? I thought about it and I thought I would do one for sure back when this fic was at the 3k mark but somehow it just kind of ran away from me and got to 6k so I'm not sure if there's much more to say.

On the other hand, Steve and Danny are (pretty much) married but there's been no such statement of feelings!

I'm quite torn because... how could I be so cruel as to end it like that?

So basically... I'm not sure. XD

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samjohnsson October 19 2010, 05:34:20 UTC
Adorable! Love this!

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chiuonthat October 19 2010, 12:36:13 UTC
Thank you~

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emocezi October 19 2010, 05:45:18 UTC
So. Fucking. Married.

I love this. I love everything about this. I love that every time I thought it was over, there was a little bit more.

And I love how everyone told them they were married and they just kept ignoring it, because come on, they're both dudes who live in the same house and sleep in the same bed and scream at each other and know each others favorite foods and are so married it hurts.

I love you for writing this. :D

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chiuonthat October 19 2010, 12:39:36 UTC
/feels face get warm

Thank you!

Yeah, when I was writing this I thought it would be short-- 3k at most. But everytime I thought I wanted to end it, I realized there was at least one more scene I wanted to write out! So in the end, you guys got... this.

But I'm glad I somehow managed to convey the "so married it hurts" vibe I get from them to you.

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emocezi October 19 2010, 13:28:03 UTC
I just reread this.

Holy fuck, they are so married, married people are jealous.

*flails at you*

I kind of love that even though they're married, they're not in a sexual relationship, because it just makes everything funnier. And even though I do love my porns, I'm getting a little tired of them just falling into bed as soon as they kiss.

So your version of things is nice.

MAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRIIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEEDDDD!!!!!!!

>__

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chiuonthat October 19 2010, 15:22:43 UTC
*grins*

Yeah, I was writing this and while I was at it I kind of thought, wow, when did I learn to appreciate irony so much? And yeah, no porn because I tried my hand at it once and got R at best. Well that and this was never intended to go into the NC-17 zone.

That maybe sequel that I make no promises on though...

Anywho, I'm glad you liked it enough to not only comment, but holy crap, you RE-READ IT. Which, by the way, makes you AWESOME. So, you know, thanks.

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