Lie Back and Think of Heaven 1/?

[chipped_diamond]

Lie Back and Think of Heaven, Dean/Castiel, 1/? 
Title: Lie Back and Think of Heaven, 1/?
Rating: R
Warnings: language, sex
Spoilers: none, slightly AU
Disclaimer: I have no control over Eric Kripke, else SPN would resemble a very gay soap opera. Oh wait. 
Summary: John dies in Dean's senior year, and Dean's left to raise Sammy on his own. Or is he?

Comments

[tracy]

Dude. I am hooked. This has just the right amount of bleakness, just the right amount of hardass!Dean angst, just the right amount of brotherly bickering and love between Dean and Sam, and just the right amount of careful tenderness from Cas that doesn't cross the line into schmoop. In other words, I WANT MORE.

(And I am so flattered I inspired this, even if indirectly! I remember you commenting to say you wanted to write callboy!fic a while ago, but I wasn't sure if it would happen. I AM GLAD IT IS. ♥!)

One thing, though, because you did say concrit was welcome -- the correct term is "lie back"; "lay" is used with an object, as in laying something down. Uh. I really hope it's not too out of place for me to point that out. -.-

[chipped_diamond]

DANG IT. I checked it a bazillion times over, thinking, "I just know I'm going to make a stupid grammatical error somewhere," and it turns out to be in the title. GO ME.

But thanks so much! I'm really relieved that someone likes it, and I'm really glad you like it! Like, squealing like a little girl glad. Like, giddy. Okay, I'm shutting up now. xD

[shiba08]

Wow this is very interesting start=)

Hope to read more. I can already see there is more to this than meets the eye..i like=)..you definitely have written something that has a lot of potential and i would love to read more^_^

[chipped_diamond]

Thank you so much! I really hope I won't disappoint. :]

[mulder200]

What an interesting beginning. Pretty bleak but with a touch of hope. I can so see Dean doing this. But who's the mysterious stranger?

I can't wait to find out more.

[chipped_diamond]

SANTA.

But thank you very much! I will try my hardest not to disappoint. :D

[crimson_antics]

I love those kind of callboy fics, and this seems like a promising start, so I'm eager to read the next part :).

[chipped_diamond]

Thank you! Yeah, callboy fics are a guilty pleasure of mine. >.>

[1deanlover1]

:( my poor dean!!!! i love it! u'll continue quickly and regularly right? RIGHT?

[chipped_diamond]

I have the next chapter already written out! I don't want to post it yet, though, because... I have nothing after that. D: BUT I WILL CONTINUE WRITING!

Ehee, I like your avatar. 8D