;__; The description is damn beautiful...and the whole chapter is just full of sorrow. I really feel Gokudera's pain.
Gokudera watches it all play out like some sick macabre horror show. He stands in the crowd of gasping onlookers and thinks about how ugly revenge can get when sirens pierce the sky. By the time the media rushes in, Gokudera has already put out his cigarette by the sole of his shoe and walks away to find the nearest subway.
His cigarette butt smolders against the cement. Fire pouring out at every crevice, and the black remains of his motel room paint the picture of hell. Tendrils of searing flares sift upward as if the earth had opened up to reveal the gates of hell, and ink stained smoke sweeps out like ashen wings of fallen angels. The skies--stained grey--weep tears for these fallen angels while the media milks the story of the burning room 202 for all it’s worth.
Brilliant, BRILLIANT part. *__* And this is chapter 1? I can't wait for the others! And Guardians27 is love. I need more of that.
dude i didn't even notice the error, my bad. XD thank-you though ~
yes, this is chapter one and there will be six more after this one. i just need to find the time to devote to them. XD chyah, it's just magical like that.
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Gokudera watches it all play out like some sick macabre horror show. He stands in the crowd of gasping onlookers and thinks about how ugly revenge can get when sirens pierce the sky. By the time the media rushes in, Gokudera has already put out his cigarette by the sole of his shoe and walks away to find the nearest subway.
His cigarette butt smolders against the cement. Fire pouring out at every crevice, and the black remains of his motel room paint the picture of hell. Tendrils of searing flares sift upward as if the earth had opened up to reveal the gates of hell, and ink stained smoke sweeps out like ashen wings of fallen angels. The skies--stained grey--weep tears for these fallen angels while the media milks the story of the burning room 202 for all it’s worth.
Brilliant, BRILLIANT part. *__* And this is chapter 1? I can't wait for the others! And Guardians27 is love. I need more of that.
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"Gokudera rolls away from Gokudera" <- oh my, clones? =D that must make gokudera fans very happy? err lol
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yes, this is chapter one and there will be six more after this one. i just need to find the time to devote to them. XD chyah, it's just magical like that.
thank-you for the comments. ♥
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