Keeping Faith.

Apr 14, 2009 20:09

Title: Keeping Faith.
Chapter: Oneshot
Author: chinesetakeout
Pairing: Aoi/Uruha
Summary: He hadn’t the heart to take the photographs of him and Uruha with him; he’d left them hanging on the walls and the remainder standing upright. It hadn’t escaped him how Uruha had flipped portraits over and placed others against the glass beneath them. It hurt Aoi more than ( Read more... )

aoi x uruha, gazette, domenoworlater, fanfiction

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anarchysinomen April 15 2009, 05:33:10 UTC
;-;
Ack. *trying not to cry*
This was so ... graceful though.

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chinesetakeout April 17 2009, 03:25:19 UTC
<3 don't cry!

&thank you(:

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like_xax_majik April 15 2009, 05:46:27 UTC
SAD FIC IS SAD T^T

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chinesetakeout April 17 2009, 03:25:39 UTC
someone had to do it D:

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inudela April 15 2009, 06:24:06 UTC
It's beautifully heartbreaking.
I think you defined their relationship really well; I guess I could say I enjoyed it, although that wouldn't exactly be the appropriate word in this case XDD

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chinesetakeout April 17 2009, 03:26:58 UTC
Thank you(:

I tried to make it as clear as I could see it in my mind. XD I got a perfect mental image of the scene, especially with Uruha outside, and I wanted to convey that.

&&I do agree XDD

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chinesetakeout April 17 2009, 03:10:50 UTC
A cigarette was poised to be smoked, lit but not untouched, and slowly the flame was dimming.'

Yes(: It was in reference to the cigarette. Sorry for the confusion XD;

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chinesetakeout April 17 2009, 03:28:02 UTC
Thank you<3

Well I might make a part II if I can work up the nerve to keep it as good XD I just fear writing a part II will ruin this one.

&&LOL XD;; I apologize. Most of my fics are so short. I didn't even realize this one was so long till I was finished with it.

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ueda_fye April 15 2009, 11:29:46 UTC
;_; so sad~ yet sweet at the same time~
really nice~

and... Aoi~ don't leave Uruhaaa~
>.

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chinesetakeout April 17 2009, 03:29:32 UTC
thank you(:

i know ;____; aoi doesn't want to. D: not really!

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