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[chimneypot]

And then it’s another night and another club and Carlos is sticking to the beer because his dick friend who was supposed to get him pills forgot and sold them to someone else. He’s not the drug addict that Dan makes him out to be - he knows the difference between recreation and addiction, has seen a few friends cross that line, knows the

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[jonie90]

I think I am loving this too much to be a healthy hobby sort of thing, but please, make some sort of...what are they called? Prequels? sequels? Post scripts? something like that. Where there is more of this, anyways. To be constructive, I really loved the part where they were breaking up, and Daniel was making all the decisions, but he was still the one almost crying, it seemed like a very good paradox, somehow. As I said, I hope you make some sort of followup to this. It is one of the best pieces i have read in the group.

[chimneypot]

oh, thank you! i didn't notice that, actually, hah. it struck me as appropriate that daniel would be the one to finally snap - he seems to be the kind who can take only so much before exploding. ish. daniel explosions, i mean!

prequels are being considered, but i have something else in the works too so we'll see!