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[chimeonthewind]

Three poem cause i had to for Literature

Comments

[springiswrath]

"Still he refused to give up his garden and re-tilled the land
Marigolds bloomed, and Forget-me-nots followed"

I absolutely love that part. It flows just right, it has the right rhythm and it's just beautiful.

[zurizip]

At somepoint when I'm more awake, I shoul actually work on the rhythym of the poem. I was so busy trying to get the proper meanings that I let beat slide. -.-