New fic: Light Up, Part XI

[chilly_flame]

Light Up

Fandom: Devil Wears Prada

Pairing: Miranda/Andy

Disclaimer: I don’t own Miranda or Andy, or anything remotely related to the Devil or Prada. Alas.

Rating: M

Note: Melodrama alert! Couldn’t resist. Thanks as ever to my beta, Xander, who helped immensely in keeping this one on track. Xan, you’re a star!

Comments

[katsforever]

wow!

How I loved every second of this series.

I loved the format of it; starting with flashbacks...then back to modern day...

the transitions were seamless.

I love when you post...it makes my day!

AWESOME

[chilly_flame]

Thank you very much! I'm glad you spotted the transitions. They were... a challenge, but for me, they had to be there, even if no one noticed. So yay! Sending awesome back to you.

[littleninja245]

Ack, I love this so much!! Definitely one of my favourite DWP stories- and I've read pretty much all of them!! :P

Loved the format of the present day and flashbacks. And, of course, incredibly well written.

Amazing work. :D

[chilly_flame]

Very cool! I'm glad you enjoyed it so much, both on story and format. It was an interesting process that kept things lively during my writing. (In other words, I never got bored. :D)

Thank you!

[styx63]

Great, I saw that you posted another story and I had enough time to read it before going to sleep. Otherwise, I would have miss some sleep tomorrow ;-)

Another wonderful story. I really like how you manage to draw a different M & A with each story but always in keeping them true to characters.

[chilly_flame]

Hi there! I'm glad to hear you say that this incarnation of M&A seemed different; some days I feel like I'm writing the same story over and over, so this is very comforting. I mean, generally speaking, it IS the same thing over and over, but I just can't help myself!

And yay that you didn't miss sleep. I am relieved! Thanks. :)

[fan_rei]

i wanted to read your story so much that i didn't stop to tell you my favorite lines in your chapters and i do regret it.
it's an original story that flow very well. i loved it. the plots are well thought and you finished it in beauty with your last 3 lines.
thank you for sharing!

[chilly_flame]

I appreciate your comment on the last lines. It's always a struggle to end it with the right words, and those took me a while!

Thanks so much for the kind reply.

[flitterbug18]

WOW that was amazing i loved the flashes between what happened in the past and what was happening in the present it gave the story a lovely balance of emotions. You had the build up of their relationship and the tension of the hostage situation...seriously amazing journey and the writing was amazing as always!!

I loved the ending..andy slowly getting over everything. and miranda's reactions in the hostage situation were perfect and actually very in character. I could picture her acting exactly that way when she has no control over something...the emotional bit where she thinks Andy had been shot was brilliant!! loved everything about it!! can't wait for another one of your fics :D

hugs

Flit xxx

[chilly_flame]

Thanks for the great comments! I'm happy you believed my version of Miranda's reactions; that was a curious line to walk, to make her hard and soft, human and tough as nails. I really appreciate it. :D