Watching

[childishgrin]

Title: Watching
Author: Viv
Genre: slight angst/drama/humor
Rating: G
Fandom: xxxHolic [manga]
Pairing: suggested Doumeki/Watanuki
Disclaimer: Hello! If it had been mine, there’d probably be smexin’ by now (or more appearances from our Legal Drug boys)!
Summary: Yuuko watches them all the time. [oneshot]

Comments

[animefreak42]

*loves* Oh, this was such a cute piece, the little bit angst and serious at the beginning build up perfectly to the funny ending. 'Cause we all know Yuuko is a yaoi fangirl at heart. ^^ Great job!

Awesome

[animefreak42]

This was awesome!!!You know, i think this is what Yuuko actually DOES!!(and keeps telling herself that it's for her employees goodfaring...¬¬)
I really liked some bits, like her chain of reactions, smirking, smiling and giggling...all of them I could picture her doing...
I think you captured the essence of the character...Yuuko-san is, after all, a watcher (kinda reminds me of Hinoto and the dreamseers of X...)

Re: Awesome

[offthesidelines]

I haven't read X, but thanks for the comment!

[offthesidelines]

Thanks!

[moonnymph]

This was so cute. It was nice to see Yuuko's vision of them (and that she shares many a fangirl's frustrations). :D I love how you characterized Doumeki and Wata without having them speak. <3

[offthesidelines]

Thank you.

The ficlet was actually supposed to be quite different from what I have here, actually. ^_^' I was going to write a drabble from Doumeki's (or Watanuki's) only POV.

[canon_4_life]

It's Yuuko-centric, love it ^^ I love how Yuuko narrates the 104. XD Thanks for sharing!

[offthesidelines]

Would you believe that my initial intention for this fic had barely any Yuuko in it? XD

104 huh? I'm useless when it comes to remembering chapter numbers, so you'll have to point me out which part it is (to see if we're on the same wavelenght). ^.^

[canon_4_life]

ohh sorry XD 104 means douwata... i think someone explain this to me why Doumeki and Watanuki called 104... i think its the number thing... XD

[offthesidelines]

Ooooh. Yeah, I was wondering, while I was replying to your comment, if it could've possibly been some kind of allusion to the pair itself, and not a chapter.

Then I thought 'ah well, whatever the case,she can just correct me.' >8P

[ichiharayuko]

LOL I love your disclaimer first and foremost. And then I love the rest of it, written from the point of view of their biggest fan. XD

[offthesidelines]

I seem to be good with disclaimer, because this isn't the first time someone mentions them in their comment.

:D

[anonymous]

This is probably the most amazing fic i've read in while (in the xxxHOLIC fandom) :) It was believable!!! ...I love it.

-CSAN

[offthesidelines]

Glad you enjoyed. :)