Comments | childishgrin: C is for Cookie and Spilled Milk

childishgrin

C is for Cookie and Spilled Milk

Aug 01, 2004 00:25

Title: C is for Cookie and Spilled Milk
Author: Viv
Genre: humour, fluff/smutt
Rating: PG/R-ish
Fandom: Simple Plan [music - band]
Pairing: David/Sebastien
Disclaimer: *shakes head* of course they're mine, like, DUH!
Summary: His squeaking voice is another sign of his embarrassment. [standalone. Two possible endings.]

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pairing: seb/dav, complete, fandom: simple plan, oneshot

Comments 22

lovestephenking July 31 2004, 22:26:12 UTC

Okay so it wasn't extremely "racy" but I must say that I still liked it. Even if I say not many people are writing NC-17 or even remotely "racy" things lately and that makes me sad. I exclude myself from that because I make it a point to avoid writing NC-17.
It still needed the original ending so I still say it needed it and am glad you kept it.
I LOVE IT OMG SEE NOW WATCH SEBASTIEN SING THE COOKIE SONG TOMORROW/LATER TONIGHT IN THE RP!

There was more but I forgot. Sigh. Oh yeah have you noticed our RP sessions get about as far as this "racy" scene before one of us has to get off line?

childishgrin August 1 2004, 08:43:37 UTC

I never that it was racy. I only asked if it was... 'racy enough' for you. erm. *frowns* Never mind, i have no idea what i'm saying.

Oh yesyesyesyes. XD

_sorethumb____ July 31 2004, 22:29:23 UTC

I like them both but since I would totally get a girl boner thinking about Seb and David touching one another, I'm going for number one.

Loved it. WRITE MORE OF THIS. Because I said so. SEQUEL THING. Ahora!

<3

childishgrin August 1 2004, 08:44:15 UTC

If i can think of anything, there could be a sequel but it's not guaranteed.

mest_up_lpfan July 31 2004, 23:06:02 UTC

i like the second one beter:) thos they were both sexy:)

childishgrin August 1 2004, 08:44:45 UTC

thanks. :)

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childishgrin August 1 2004, 08:45:07 UTC

Yes, my point exactly. :)

fallenrockangel July 31 2004, 23:45:57 UTC

When I got word of the two alternate endings, it reminded me of something. The concept of multiple endings reminds me of the "create your own adventure" book series. I kept half expecting in the middle of the story for and edit not to appear and say: "If you decided to rip off Seb's underware and have your way with him. Turn to page 88. If you decide to clean up the mess, turn to the next page."

Honestly it was a good story. I liked it. The imagery was very cute and for some unknown reason, I could see seb singing the cookie song. I liked both endings. Ending one, was more suggestive of a PWP which would have been nice to see on this comm. But ending two made the reader smile. I like the way you presented David, his voice kept the reader gripped. Good job.

childishgrin August 1 2004, 08:46:25 UTC

"If you decided to rip off Seb's underware and have your way with him. Turn to page 88. If you decide to clean up the mess, turn to the next page."

Now see, when i decided to write another ending, i kept giggling while doing so because something of the kind kept coming to my mind. XD

lovestephenking August 1 2004, 14:44:34 UTC

*turns to page 88.*

I mean... *cough*