Dawn

[chiiyo86]

Title: Dawn
Characters: Dean, Sam, Bobby, Death.
Rating: PG13
Disclaimer: I don't own anything Supernatural related.
Word count: 1034 words.
Summary: Sam wakes up. Coda to 6.11.
A/N: Another Christmas present that I wrote for galathea_snb, who wanted me to continue where episode 6.11 left off. Merry Christmas, hon! And thank you to my beta, wave_obscura.

Comments

[galathea_snb]

Awww, you did it! ♥ I love it. I love that you didn't try to predict what we will get: Sam who remembers robo!Sam or Sam who has no memories at all. You simply grounded the story in Dean's doubts and fears and relief and that worked really well for me. I love especially that little moment where Dean is just so happy to hear Sam say his name and the way he hesitates to touch his brother at first. Man, I really hope we'll get some genuine brotherly bonding in 6.12.

Thank you so much for writing this. ♥ It's a great present that makes me anticipate the return of the show even more!

[chiiyo86]

Yay, I'm happy you loved it! I rarely write codas so I was a little worried about how it would come out. I hope we'll have some brotherly bonding too! Thank you for your comment! &hearts

[borgmama1of5]

This is exactly what happened next! You've got Dean's mix of emotions exactly right!

[chiiyo86]

Hee, thank you! I don't write codas very often, so I'm glad to know it worked for you!

[rokhal]

"It’s like throwing something from the roof of a tall building . . ."
Sweet metaphor!
And Dean's anxiety is palpable.

[chiiyo86]

Thank you for reading and commenting! :)

[embroiderama]

This is a wonderful coda to the episode.

t’s like throwing something from the roof of a tall building, watching it fall, not knowing where it’s going to land, not knowing if it’s going to hurt someone down there, and there isn’t a goddamn thing you can do about it.

Wow, yeah, exactly.

[chiiyo86]

Thank you! I don't do codas very often, so I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

[candycanerica]

Yikes. I picture the near future as a constant need for diversionary tactics as Sam tries to pick at that wall. I hope that it turns out not to be this hard, because... this is kind of scary.

[chiiyo86]

I have absolutely no idea of how they're going to do that, but I too hope that it won't be that hard! Thank you for reading and commenting!