Big Bang Master Post

[chiiyo86]

Title: Hover Through the Fog and Filthy Air
Characters/Pairings: Sam, Dean, OCs (OMC/OFC, OFC/OFC)
Rating: R
Disclaimer: I don't own anything Supernatural related.
Summary: AU after “Lucifer Rising.” 2013 - The demon war ended three years ago with Lucifer’s death. Sam and Dean, now living in Portland, Oregon, are learning how to live after a violent

Comments

[scarletsherlock]

I enjoyed this very much. I found the case genuinely creepy and unsettling (I thought roque_clasique did a fabulous job capturing the mood of the whole piece). I loved reading about Sam and Dean post-apocalypse when they deal with the trauma they've been through in a frank manner, and I think you did very well capturing the banter between them. This is a scary story, but I laughed out loud several times, especially at some of Dean's lines. I liked Paul and enjoyed the interactions between the Winchesters and all of your OCs.

[chiiyo86]

Thank you for taking the time to read and comment! I'm glad I managed to make you laugh, because I love some humor in a dark story, and this was what I was aiming at.

You're the first one to tell me they love Paul! &hearts This OC is special to me, though we share barely more than a nationality (and the fact that I'm going to be a lector in an American university next fall).

[pkwench]

I have been looking forward to this! I'm going to tuck into it later if I get all of my self-assigned chores done today. Can't wait!

[chiiyo86]

I hope you will like the story whenever you have the time to read it! (I'm just back from Italy, that's why I didn't answer earlier)

[smilla02]

I just wanted to say officially: YAY! Congrats, sweetie.

[chiiyo86]

Thank you! I'm just so happy I did it - it was a real challenge, I can't believe I did it all the way!

[etrix]

Just finished the whole story and, wow. There's so much depth to everything and everyone in this story, yet most of it is presented so naturally and smoothly, that it's hard to believe English isn't your first language.

You're version of the boys is so believable, so heart-breaking, yet with small glimmer of hope, that you sucked me in right from the start. Gonna recommend this to all my SPN friends. =]

[chiiyo86]

I'm touched by what you say about my English - it's hard writing in a foreign language and making it smooth (because I don't think that not being a native speaker is an excuse to give bad prose to the readers!). But if you had seen my first drafts, you would find it less hard to believe - there's a reason I never post a fic unbeta'd! ;)

Thank you for your lovely comment, I'm glad your liked it enough to recommend it to your friends!

[meret]

I'm not normally a big fan of case fics, but this was excellent. Great job! :)

[chiiyo86]

You have great timing, you review comes at a moment when I'm feeling really down! I'm happy you enjoyed it, thanks for reading and commenting. &hearts