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Fic: Chained...

Jul 25, 2010 21:57

Title: Chained

Author: chickinwhite

Pairing: Kahlan/Cara, and there is Dahlia as well...

Rating: PG 16

Word account: ~ 3,650

Summary: It was the fourth night of her captivity and they had been on their horses from sunrise to sunset....

Disclaimer: Nothing of LotS belongs to me (such a pity!) - no business, just fan-fun

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fanfic, mord sith, c/k, dahlia, lots, cara/kahlan,

Comments 12

mayireadtoday July 25 2010, 21:26:58 UTC

Cara to the rescue!

chickinwhite July 25 2010, 21:34:39 UTC

WOW! I´m just totally rapt by your reading!! ;o) honestly. I followed your comments over the last 1/2 hour, and ...THANKS FOR EVERY STEP!!(excuse me if I just answer once, ok?)
but, you see, I need somuch more time to read... how do you do this? Are you eating the words? or inhaling? LOL! Never saw s.o. running so fast... ;o) GREAT!
Makes a lot of fun...!
At least seems you enjoyed it? I´m happy to welcome you and thank you for (fastest-ever-seen-)reading and (even-faster-and nice-)commenting... ;o) Glad to see you here!

mayireadtoday July 25 2010, 22:21:20 UTC

Inhaling is a good way to describe how I read. I can only speed read fiction -- I'm very slow when it comes to nonfiction.

rhyfeddu July 26 2010, 02:32:41 UTC

Man, you keep upping the ante at how bad Kahlan gets it here, don't you?

And your Dahlia is certainly a pretty twisted sister. :)

an angry agiel, snapping at her back like a vicious dog I liked that imagery. And hey, you used the "poking a rattlesnake" line, too! ;)

chickinwhite July 26 2010, 10:55:58 UTC

Oh yes, I´m really a little afraid for Kahlan, but as I know her, she is strong and fierce!
Dahlia is just a bitch! Or a rattlesnake ;o) (loved that!) (thanks therefore!)totally manic... Poor babe, the real loss of Cara is driving her mad...
And at least, I´m glad to have Cara around again, so i think Kahlan can beat everything if Cara is beside, no?
- thanks for following... ;o)

jolo_65 July 26 2010, 12:53:15 UTC

Yay Cara to the rescue!!!! Really enjoying the tale you're weaving...

Poor Kahlan she's not having the best time of it!!!! Hopefully Cara will get a chance to make her all better....

Look forward to the next update..thx

chickinwhite July 26 2010, 20:18:17 UTC

Yes, Cara= red knight in shining armour... ;o)
I´m sure she find´s a way.. or she dugs a tunnel? Anyway, as long as she is there with Kahlan...
Thanks for following! ;o)

dark_kurai July 28 2010, 02:03:29 UTC

I finally caught up! Gah, this is such a thrill ride... I loved your description of the run to the Hidden Castle and Kahlan's thoughts and actions... I wondered if there was a chance for Cara, but she's there! YAY!
*waves Cara flag*
MORE PLZ! *bows in pleading*

chickinwhite July 28 2010, 16:35:54 UTC

Hey, welcome back! Wollte mir schon sorgen machen... ;o) Hope your cousin is allright?!
Yay, while Cara was all emotion in the last part, Kahlan takes matters in her own hand... even if she´s hurt! She´s so adorable...
More? Well, think so, if I can Cara convince to not just to run away with her girl...

olli01a January 1 2011, 01:14:05 UTC

Just a reminder how formidable Cara is. She shows up at the most impossible places. I wonder What will happen with the young Mord Sith.

chickinwhite January 2 2011, 09:18:44 UTC

Yeah, Cara is... Cara! And I´m so proud of her... :)
I hope, you won´t be disappointed, that the young MS won´t play a main roll... I had a certain idea about her, but at least I found some things... more important to fix them :)
(I might return to that idea in my next fic, we´ll see...)

olli01a January 2 2011, 13:54:36 UTC

I might return to that idea in my next fic, we´ll see...

I hope yo do so.