Fic : Touched

[chickinwhite]

Title: Touched
 Author: chickinwhite

Rating: PG 16 
 Pairing: Cara/Kahlan,
 Word account: ~ 3100
 Summary : ...  it was a spot that the Creator herself would have chosen for a break..
 claimer: Nothing of LotS belongs to me (such a pity!) - no business, just fan-fun

Note: Okay, life is wonderful! But there´s not always funnytiems. So enjoy the sun and

Comments

[talarogue77]

Not bad.
Love the strong feelings displayed between Kahlan and Cara.

Word of critique: detail is good...but leave some to the imagination :)

[chickinwhite]

Yes, they are really very strong. And its not that easy to deal with it...
Thanks for your critique, I try always to learn... If you want to give me an example: Feel free to show me... ;o)
Thanks for reading and commenting!

[synergyfox]

But but... -point- but Kahlan! You took Kahlan away and now Cara's in the hands of a crazed Dahlia and many Mord'Sith and... ._. -hopes powerful magic saves Kahlan-

[chickinwhite]

Well, my heard bleeded writing this...
But who needs powerful magic when there is a Cara?? ;o)
And at least: they had joy and love, most part of the chapter, no?
don´t worry! I try to update soon....

[synergyfox]

>_> so... Kahlan's not dead dead then? >_>

[chickinwhite]

Hmm, how to tell you...?
Well, I am sure she was at the end of the chapter...
Really, yes. - I´ll ask Cara if she knows more...?!?
... ;o)

[bsofthewest]

TBC I hope so.

[chickinwhite]

Ohoh, PLEASE! Don´t get angry with me! I know this was hard, but it had to be...I wll try to calm you with the next...Promised!

[beautifullauren]

Oh man *sigh* I hate angst *sniff* Please tell me Cara will somehow get out of this, kill that bitch and give Kahlan the breath of life. *sniff*

[chickinwhite]

I´m sure, cara is on her way... And this time the bitch won´t be sure to get her mercy, no? ;o)
Yes, angsty angst shouldn´t be allowed...
Perhaps it was just tooo hot last week and something inside my normally really nice-guy-heart is burnt...
Well I hate to hear you sniffing! i´ll search for a back-door, ok?

[dark_kurai]

You... she... b-but.. Kahlan! ;_; Dahlia, you evil wench, you! Cara is so not going to let that stay this way!

[chickinwhite]

You know, I love Kahlan with all of my heart! So Cara is not the only one who can´t bear things staying like this...
I really hope she finds a way... - if she ever stops torturing me for Kahlans death... *Aua, Cara!...*