Pride & Destiny - chapter 1

[chickinwhite]

Author: chickinwhite
Pairing: Kahlan/Cara
Rating: PG 17
Word account: 4500
Summary: End of Season 1 - And the beginning of an unexpected future for two sworn enemies, who have to learn to have faith in each other while trying to survive in a hostile world...
Disclaimer: Nothing of LotS belongs to me (such a pity!) - no business, just fan-fun

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Comments

[katvrah]

I don't know if there is smt wrong with me but I love Cara even when she is at her worst ! Anyway great story you know that.I hope it will be a long one too.

[chickinwhite]

There is nothing wrong with you! Believe me, it´s the most natural thing in the world to just love that sweet lil devil she can be...
Well, I´m afraid this story will indeed be a long one... since for now I´m still feeding my plot bunnies, trying to put them in order for my muse, so that she´ll be able to herd them in the long run... ;)
Let´s see where it leads us...

[bsofthewest]

YIPPIE...this is going to be a rollicking adventure. I'm ready for more and am so glad you have put "pen to paper" so to speak.

[chickinwhite]

Aww, thank you so much! I´m happy to see that my work is appreciated. And yes, I expect it to be rollicking, and... angsty! Of course! LOL! So, stay tuned...

[olli01a]

I like the fight-scene. It is very well written and thrilling. You hit Cara very well.

[chickinwhite]

Hah!! Thanks so much!
As usual I´m always a lil unsure about my fight scenes, so it´s good to see it works! Apparently, the strong tension between our ladies can only be calmed by fighting - for now...
And: I´m absolutely happy for the Cara hitting... ähm, I mean, not really hitting her...but hitting her well...*coughs* (ähm, Mist, wie komm ich da wieder raus?) *LOL*
Actually I think she´s not that easy to write, so, thank you!!

[olli01a]

Maybe under certain circumstances hitting Cara has the same meaning like hitting on her? Can't wait until Kahlan figures that out.

[astscott21]

That was a good chapter.I liked the spin that you are putting on this story especially if you are trying to keep to the original episode but giving us something better. Can't wait to see all the twists and turns that will no doubt continue to keep us wanting more. Thanks for the update. Loved the fight scene and definitely looking forward to see how this will turn out.

[chickinwhite]

Well, I really wondered why no one else has ever considered this twist...- Oh wait, fortunata13 has done, though it´s been in a completely different sense... Yet, I´m not sure how much of the original episode(s) will be involved,- coughs - and I love my twisty turns, you know...- coughs - *winks*
Thanks for reading and commenting! Happy to see you´re joining!

[greatshow]

I meant to state earlier that I read Chapter 1 soon after the prologue and enjoyed it. I'm glad that you're writing this story and are giving us more Cara and Kahlan to cherish. I'm off to read Chapter 2 and will comment on that as well.