Ficlet: Alone I Break (Veronica) PG-13

[chichuri]

Title: Alone I Break
Fandom:  Veronica Mars
Author: chichuri
Pairing/Character: Veronica
Word Count: 1036
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Middle of 3.09; Veronica's breakdown in the shower
Spoilers: 3.9
Disclaimer: Veronica Mars is not mine, of course.
Author's note: The title is from the song by Korn--although I'm ashamed to admit it took me a half hour to remember

Comments

[out_of_ritalin]

bravo.

[motylik]

Amazing. Really insightful. Very well writen. Awesome.

[fickledame]

This is really, really good. A really great insight into Veronica at that moment - great work. Going in my memories.

[hiddeneloise]

Be it through pleasure or pain, Logan has always been able to muffle her regimented intellect and unleash an emotional response. Now that he has taken away the pleasure, all she has left is the pain, a gnawing torture of might-have-beens and never-will-bes she brought on herself. Her mistrust, her pathological need not to depend on anyone else, drove away the one person who had accepted everything she was. Despite the terrors she has faced down and defeated, she wasn't brave enough to reach out and embrace the shelter Logan had offered and she has to live with the bitter consequences of her own inadequacies.

Gah! So perfect an so true! Sigh.

Thank you for this. It's honest and insightful, and I can feel Veronica's pain, while understanding why she didn't see it coming. Sigh. Beautiful.

Oh, and I love your icon! That Santa hat on your customary wolfe is hysterical! :)

[zeldafitzgerald]

This is awesome. I have no doubt that this pretty much encompasses Veroncia's feelings on the break-up.