[fic] A Few Firsts VI

[chibinecco]

Title: A Few Firsts VI - Eight Months
Author: chibinecco
Universe/Series: ST: XI
Rating: All Audiences/PG
Relationship status: Established
Word count: ~2,600
Plot: angst, crack, drama, h/c, humor, fluff, family, mpreg, telepathy
Warnings: mpreg
Summary: A few milestone firsts in Sochya's life as Kirk and Spock begin preparations for expanding their little

Comments

[alliegator]

Aww, 'Bobbin is the cutest nickname ever! Bones is such a big squishy marshmallow on the inside.

[chibinecco]

Adorable, squishy pushover ^.^ That's Bones in a nutshell ^.^ *snugs him*

[adafrog]

Love it.

[chibinecco]

*GRIN* thank you ^.^

[diane_kepler]

The Tale of How the 'Bobbin Got His Name is epic and shall be sung by bards for centuries to come.

Reading this, it struck me how your natural prose is so similar to how we RP. Lots of dialogue and a back and forth that's so steady it's almost like a metronome. Insane cuteness. Very natural speech.

Nogura's fate was so good I wanted to fist-pump. Yeah! Mess with Sochya and see what happens!

[chibinecco]

*grin* ^.^ just in time for it to happen XP Time travel is fun XD

hee ^.^ dialogue's always come very easily to me, it's putting the actions on to assist with emotions without being a giant wall of text that's harder for me. It's the kind of writing I like to read too. Authors that describe EVERYTHING and are too introspective without ever having anyone talk about anything... can't read them XP

and YES I ALMOST didn't put it in, but then I went to give it a quick read-through and first scene reminded me they were going to bitch slap him, and that popped into my head ^.^ served him right XP

[alinealghost]

At last I'm here!
And I claim my Vulcan right over this fic, given I was who ALWAYS knew that 'Bobbin was 'lil' hobgoblin'.
I declare, also, that I LUV this 'First' and I will be one of the bards who sang about it!!
Talking serious mode; just the precise words and the IC McCoy. Wa'itaren is not enough.
Cha'i t'naat na-du (?) (zillion thanks for your hard work), maybe.
The entire series -from Due dates to all the Firsts- is PRECIOUS.
Period.
N.
the alinealghost.

[chibinecco]

*GRIN* hee ^.^ Thank you SO much ^.^ I just LVOE hearing from you ^.^ your comments always make my day ^.^ Thanks SO much, hoping to get another one out sometime this weekend.

[shayalyce]

Oh how true it is for children! Give them a special nickname, just between you two, and you have the makings of a beautiful relationship! My father did that with my son and it gave their relationship a deeper dimension. My grandfather did that with me with the same result. It's such a human thing. Bones find the magic solution to Sochya's misery. Good Bones!

[chibinecco]

I had a history teacher in Highschool who called me "Kiddo." I've been called "Kiddo" before and since and it's always just felt annoying; but for whatever reason, from him, it just felt awesome. Like I was important. I'm pretty sure he just called EVERYONE "Kiddo" when he couldn't be arsed to remember our names XP

[shayalyce]

Sometimes, it's in the delivery. My grandfather called me 'sorrel top,' because he was a farmer and my hair was the color of a sorrel horse's mane. Not a particularly nice nickname, you'd think, but his tone of voice.... Quite honestly, if my grandfather hadn't had that nickname for me, spoken with such a loving tone, I'd never had known how much he loved me! He would've given Vulcans a run for their money when it came to stoicism. My father was the opposite - a very outgoing man, who ended up helping raise my son. Despite the fact that I had a brother, my son ended up being the son my father never. My brother was too much like my mother's family and didn't get along at all with my dad even at a young age. My son, on the other hand, was quite a bit like both his grandfathers - very outgoing and social and extremely bright - so my father came to treat him like his own. He didn't like Keir's name, however, so he called him by his initials for Keir's entire childhood, until Keir became an adult. My son still gets a special smile when he

[chibinecco]

It really really is. And it came from a particularly mind-boggling typo. I was trying to type "Hobgobblin" but somehow "Bobbin" happened instead. And it's just the PERFECT thing for McCoy to call Sochya.