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chibinecco

[fic] Defective Parts 2/4

Jul 10, 2010 19:52

Title: Defective Parts
Characters: Chris/Zach
Genre: Humor, Romance, Drama
Rating: NC-17
Length: ~6500 words Part 2 of 4
Summary: Something is making Chris reluctant to let Zach get too close, Zach suspects it has something to do with his previous relationships he refuses to talk about.
Warnings: angst, less-OoC, no-beta
AN: I really wish these bozos ( Read more... )

rating: nc-17, pairing: pinto, genre: humor, theme: kink bingo, fandom: rps, meta: prompt/challenge, genre: fluff, genre: romance, genre: hurt/comfort, series: defective parts, rating: pg-13, meta: fanfiction

Comments 18

snapechic76 July 11 2010, 01:18:33 UTC

Gah! This is killing me. I can't wait for more!

chibinecco July 11 2010, 01:20:55 UTC

*grin* awesome ^.^ I love hearing people want more ^.^

I've been really enjoying writing this, and I've been writing like a MADMAN, so the next chapter will PROBABLY be up some time tomorrow or monday.

engineroom July 11 2010, 01:56:51 UTC

I did not see that coming. Poor Chris! I am so glad you're working on more. This is a really interesting story, and of course, quite well-written. Your characterization is good; I especially love your Nimoy. There's undertones of anxiety and suspense throughout the whole story that is delicious.

chibinecco July 11 2010, 02:11:23 UTC

Thanks so much ^.^ and 29 years hiding something like that makes a guy good at keeping secrets, I wanted to try to keep it a surprise since this is from Zach's perspective, and he doesn't have a clue.

Also, I have no IDEA where Nimoy came from. He's not even IN the outline I wrote. He just snuck in while I wasn't looking XP

Love to see what you think of the next two chapters, which I think will be a little less suspenseful XP though Nimoy stowed away into this chapter who knows what they'll do next XP

medea_fic July 11 2010, 03:25:42 UTC

Interesting development! Poor Christopher. I'm glad Zach is trying to be supportive. Looking forward to the next bit. :)

chibinecco July 11 2010, 05:34:29 UTC

heh, glad you liked ^.^ More soon, tomorrow or the day after most likely, assuming my writing speed keeps up the way it has been.

margarks July 11 2010, 06:57:46 UTC

omgosh! poor chris! I hope that zach shows him how to feel better about himself and that he's not really defective!

chibinecco July 11 2010, 13:40:25 UTC

well... by the raw definition of "defective"... XD kidding. I'm sure they'll be fine, probably... have to write it and see with the way these two will steal the tracks XD

inpurity July 11 2010, 10:39:09 UTC

Oh this is so very interesting!
I was not expecting this turn of events, but you handled it very well. I am usually not fond of stories with a lot of dialogs, but you are doing a great job with it, and I am getting really attached to your chris and Zach.
Cannot wait for more.

chibinecco July 11 2010, 13:44:34 UTC

*grin* thank you so much. and I find dialog to be relaxing. Two guys talking to eachother is two guys talking to eachother it's a lot easier than two guys... i dunno. playing a videogame? where you have to describe their thumb movements in great detail to get across what's goign on. there are only so many different words for "go forward." XD glad you're enjoying it though. it's great to hear what I'm trying to do is working.

And fight scenes are a BITCH. He punched. He kicked. He did a super flippy thing that looks great in my head but is so wordy on paper to describe I look like a lunatic.