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[chibimiroku]

Hey, guess what?

..It's another poem! The muse is barely alive, but one can always hope, right?
And if you can't identify them, do a ctrl+a for a surprise!

Wrath
Battle hunger, torrential rage, bloodthirst;
The temptation towards wanton destruction.
A capital crime? It ranks as the worst.
More insidious? Its mode of function.
The exquisite mix of pleasure

Comments

[mmargo]

Haha. Niice.
I especially like "the urge to remove one's pants". So delicately put. :)

[chibimiroku]

Thank you, thank you.

But really, what better way to phrase it? :P

[sunshinetheresa]

Yay! I guessed most of them; I think there was one I couldn't think the name of. My favorite lines are "Small itself, but opens the gate for more; /
Allowing entry to sins of the core."

[chibimiroku]

Hahaha - really? I would have thought that those lines were some of the lamest of the lot.

I'm thinking of writing a revision of this for gamers, but I'm having a stupid amount of trouble with it.
Ugh.

[sunshinetheresa]

*shrugs* I like it :)

A revision of this for gamers?! o_O

[chibimiroku]

Yeah - the seven deadly sins....in reference to gamers! D: