Comments | chibimeringue: [FIC] Hen Pecked

chibimeringue

[FIC] Hen Pecked

Jul 02, 2010 02:15

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edward, winry, mustang, fanfiction, fullmetal alchemist, hawkeye

Comments 7

evil_little_dog July 2 2010, 20:15:26 UTC

This is a cute story; Ed hiding out in East City from Winry. :D

Just one thing, though, there is no 'jesus' in Amestris, so you might want to just have Ed say, 'hell', or 'damn' or something along that nature.

chibimeringue July 7 2010, 18:17:55 UTC

Oh crap, you're right. xD [/facepalm] I'll change that out. But I'm glad you liked it!

evil_little_dog July 8 2010, 00:21:19 UTC

It was very cute!

luvr4fantanim July 4 2010, 23:19:29 UTC

Really cute story :D I loved the names since the story behind it is quite obvious ;D I also loved the way that Al told his brother about Mai's pregnancy :D It seems so like him :D

Gotta love Hawkeye for her guns, though! ;D

chibimeringue July 7 2010, 18:18:23 UTC

xD It's not Hawkeye if she's not armed, after all!
I'm glad you liked it! <3

ace_nikkei July 6 2010, 04:27:38 UTC

Lovely little fic! :D
Love the interaction/relationship between Roy and Ed. Right on target.

chibimeringue July 7 2010, 18:17:27 UTC

Thank you~~! <3