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[chibi_inu13]

Happy Pride Week ^^

In honor of this i have written a fic, sorry but it isn't yaoi or anything, just something for the challenge.

Oh...i have a question: Is Superman gay?

Personally...i think he's bi, what do you guys think?

Okay, enough of that, here's the fic, enjoy ^^

Title: Breaking Point
Characters: Inuyasha/Kagome
Rating: R
Genre:

Comments

[heron_advocate]

That was....really hot. Good job.

[chibi_inu13]

really...you don't think Kags was easy do you, cause re-reading it, it seemed like it lol

Oh well...glad you liked it ^^

[heron_advocate]

With Inuyasha around? No such thing as 'too easy.' LMAO.

[poetic_pixie_13]

That was hot and sweet and funny and hot and cute.

And stop telling people I beta your fic when I do very little. Makes me feel bad.

And Superman is bi, why do you think he and Batman are always working together.

[chibi_inu13]

And stop telling people I beta your fic when I do very little. Makes me feel bad

but you do beta my work Pi...even though there is the occasional mistake or two but really, i ask you to beta and you say yes. Therefore you are my beta T.T

I feel bad for Robin...Superman is stealing Batman away...lol

[poetic_pixie_13]

Robin/Starfire = OTP! Well, Robin and Batman's love is one that will outshine all, but they do eventually part ways. Seriously though, all superheroes are gay and nothing anyone says will ever change my mind.

Great job!

[anonymous]

Good job on this one! ^_^ Loved the whole game of cat and mouse. Definitely different than anything else I've seen. :)

I've been drafting ideas for the 'chocolate chip cookie' theme, which I think I'll do first.

Re: Great job!

[crysalie]

Oops...sorry! That last one was me...I forgot I wasn't logged in!

Re: Great job!

[chibi_inu13]

lol...i guessed as much ^^

i can't wait to read your fic, i can't wait to see how you're going to incorpriate a chocolate chip cookie in it ^^

[aimakichan]

That was HOT. Inuyasha's so... confident... and arrogant and I absolutely love that. It's fun to watch Kagome so helpless against him. Awesome job! ^___^

[chibi_inu13]

confident, arrogant inuyasha is teh sex XD

i felt really bad for torturing kags like that, if any guy left me hanging like that i'd kill him lol ^^

thanks for reading

[hineko_eloriel]

This managed to be cute and hot at the same time. I really liked this one. ^_^

Just two very small things that you missed: one minute the two of your were arguing I think it's supposed to be "you" here.
It's also "Osuwari" and not "Oswari".

Other than that... If you'll excuse me, I have to fan myself some. XD I loved this, well done! ^_^

[chibi_inu13]

lol damn...thanks for the correction, i'll fix that now ^^

really? i can't believe i forgot the 'u' --; i've been off inuyasha for a while now and i've only recently gotten back into it, so my inuyasha knowledge isn't up to par ^^;

[hineko_eloriel]

You're welcome. *smiles*

Yep, that's apparently the correct spelling. Many people misses the 'u' though and if you haven't watched or read Inuyasha for a while it's a very easy mistake to make. ^_^

[chibi_inu13]

i suppose i should start watching the anime again...although the last episode and fourth movie weren't as good as i hoped they would be. in fact, it was b/c of them that i went off inuyasha for a while ^^