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[chibi_inu13]

Okay...so i managed to finally finish this one-shot that's been on my mind for a while. It's a tad bit...dark, and will sorta creep you out. I hope you guys all enjoy this. Oh and for the first time, i actually got someone to beta it -thanks Pi

Comments

[poetic_pixie_13]

Wow. That was intense. Naraku's a dirty bitch. This has reduced me to speak in short sentences. It's that good.

Bravo!

[chibi_inu13]

lol. That is good. Naraku is a bitch...a very sexy bitch XP I can't wait to read your companion piece for this ^^

[poetic_pixie_13]

I love your fics. There're so good that they make inspire my muse. It's writing a fanfic of a fanfic. ^^

[chibi_inu13]

glad i could help ^^ I never thought of it that way...oh well, i won't stop writing if you don't stop, deal?

[alterfano]

ooo. very dark, but with a happy ending. Well, done, and you were right: creeeeepppy. Kagome loses her innocence, poor thing.

[chibi_inu13]

yeah...i hope it wasn't that creepy...it was really hard for me to write that, but like you said, it did end well...kinda lol. Tahnks for reading ^^

[alterfano]

yeah. i'm writing my first "dark fic" and it's harder than I thought......congrats again for pulling it off!

[chibi_inu13]

yeah dark!fics are really hard to write, much harder than fluffy, happy fics. I wish you luck on your dark fic, and i can't wait to read it, it's really hard to find any good dark fics out there ^^ by the way, is it okay if i friend you?

[heron_advocate]

OMFG. YEY. I just knew that she was going to die before he came.

So...did she die? Because I like to think that she would, because it would just be THAT MUCH SADDER OMFG. ;_;

[chibi_inu13]

The ending was supposed to elude to her death...she waited for Inuyasha, she had faith in him, and he did come, but it was too late T_T Oh well...at least she got the last laugh...sorta lol ^^

[firegod]

Hard to find stories in second person point of view that actually work out. You did well. It was very, very good.

[chibi_inu13]

Thank you ^^

[chibi_inu13]

wow thanks ^^

Grammatical mistakes? Weird...my beta was suppose to fix all those lol

I don't really write Nar/Kag but I sometimes do, but yeah. i'll join your comm, it sounds interesting.