The Best Gift

[chibakawa]

[Fic] The Best Gift   I was not good at waiting. Never have been, especially when it came to waiting for people. Waiting for him. Perhaps there was a large part of me that thought he wouldn't show up. Maybe he'd forgotten about the date. Or decided to go out with friends.

Because that's what Yasuda was

Comments

[gekkouw]

OMG WHA- WAIT, WHAT DDDDD: you ninjas!
it's long!!!!!!!!!!
*runs to read and comes back when she can breathe*

[gekkouw]

waaaaaaa <333333
that's just wow. why so perfect <3
I really loved this. Exactly my fave things together. Subaru's thoughts and Yasu on top (yeah;D).
And Subaru's freshly cut hair <33333
And, and.
and I knew I would wait for him all day if I needed to.
you would wait for him all your life, wouldn't you? <3

Ahhhh, really, thank you so much for thinking about me and all and and and and ..... and I really really loved this <3 Yasuba ftw ^^V

really, just... unf. ♥

[chibakawa]

You're welcome ♥ The quality isn't the best, but I only had one day to put it together.

I'm glad if you enjoyed it even a little ♥

[elyndys]

This was really, really good! I loved the way you describe their relationship and its off-again, on-again nature, because that's so how they are! And the sex scene was wonderful, so tender and caring and hot too, I loved it all! Thank you so much for writing, please do write moar Yasuba oneshots~~ ;D As well as multiparters~~ ^_~

[anippan]

I think you did very well for your first Yasuba oneshot and in fact I can think of at least 3 other ones you should write XD

*cough*planetoftheyasussubaruscissorhandsworldconquistadoryasuwithconcubinesubaru*cough*

I know you were worried but I thought Subaru and Yasu were pretty spot on. Especially the way you portrayed the relationship. I like the little details like how Subaru gets up to leave right away because he's always had to before... That right there said a lot. And then when Yasu asks him to stay and then move in it really brings home how big this is for them and for Yasu. Also, remember how we were talking about Yasu being more selfish recently? I think you somehow portrayed that really well. He's still kind, he's still Yasu , but he's doing things on his terms - I loved that. It rang very true to 2010 Yasu. So, I liked it! Good job♥

And the sex... this pervert approves! Haha XD I wanna hurry up and RP yasuba sex with you now xD

P.S. I feel proud for being mentioned in the notes. Yay! Haha <3

[simten]

though it's your first yasuba oneshot,I think u did a very VERY good job...
I'm craving for more smex(especially in your multichap *_* )

[fancyann1974]

so lovely and very hot
thank you for sharing
:)