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chiazu

A Selfish Man

Sep 22, 2011 05:29

Title: A Selfish Man
Arthur: Chiazu
Fandom: Criminal Minds
Pairing: Hotch/Reid
Characters: Hotch, Reid
Genre: Angst
Rating: I'm gonna go with FRT for this one
A/N: Can I just say that love how Reid is all badass now? 'Cause he is and I do! <3 I hope he stays this way. And this is dedicated to Emz from IKY'dU for pulling me out of my funk earlier this ( Read more... )

criminal minds, hotch/reid, fanfic

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chiazu September 22 2011, 18:46:02 UTC

Thanks!

Yes, it's a very good thing. =3

cullenblaze September 22 2011, 12:16:03 UTC

this was awesome:-) and I love badass reid as well, it's so hot;-)

chiazu September 22 2011, 18:46:22 UTC

Thanks! OMG, Wasn't it? X3

maldeluxx September 22 2011, 12:33:51 UTC

Convinced that the man didn't know Reid was him - makes me wonder if there's some word missing between 'was' and 'him', perhaps 'with'?

But anyway, a very good response to the episode, loved it and this :) <3<3

chiazu September 22 2011, 18:47:03 UTC

Yeah, thanks for pointing that out. I'll fix it.

Thank you.

bowie28 September 22 2011, 13:00:56 UTC

Nice. Exactly what I need after the season premiere. I love the line 'He saw Reid holding his hand lightly, the same way he often held his favorite book.' Gosh, how I missed the boys.

chiazu September 22 2011, 18:47:35 UTC

We all missed them. I'm glad you liked my story.

emzbuckley September 22 2011, 13:11:15 UTC

Oh I love it!!! You got all the angst & hurt in there, Reid being all pissed off & I just love the confrontation. I feel sorry for Hotch to, having to lie & know it could damage their relationship at the same time. And the kissing bit was really sweet.

Nice job Hun! I love it!

chiazu September 22 2011, 18:48:49 UTC

Thank you! I tried my best. And it really take me all night to write it. I was up until 5 am. >.> That makes me seem a bit obsessive doesn't it?

emzbuckley September 22 2011, 19:03:06 UTC

Lol! No. It only means you wanted to write it and do your best! At lest you were writing about something nice, I have been up to 5am with uni work & between the two, I would prefer this, lol! I always think stories based on something like this will be hard to write, it's not an easy subject to write about and to het the reactions to be authentic to the characters would react. So you have done a great job!

chiazu September 22 2011, 19:31:16 UTC

lol, Who wouldn't prefer this? XD You're right. It wasn't easy to get everything written they it was. I had to keep stopping to think, like every five minutes. Main reason why I was up all night, I don't like to leave things unfinished. Thanks again! <3