I was wrong about you (1/?)

[chewinggum20]

Title: I was wrong about you
Author: Chewinggum20
Rating: NC-13 - deals with Cancer, may be a trigger
Length: 1271
Spoilers: None really but season one just to be safe
Summary: Rachel has left McKinley and nobody knows why. Nobody really cares and nobody is happier then Quinn that the diva is finally gone, that is until one chance meeting changes

Comments

[mjacton]

I do think you should continue. Consequences also deals with a sensitive subject, and I think you're good at it. You've got a warning on this one, and I think on Consequences also, so if people don't want to read about these things, they won't.

But, I will, for one. Another thing about it is, you tend to write short chapters, which is bad in a way because it ends too soon, but also good because it means we don't have to be overwhelmed by the angst.

[chewinggum20]

Glad you think I should continue because I have some really good idea's for this story.

The reason I tend to write in short chapters is because when I am reading stories with long chapters I tend to skim through some parts where its so long, so I try to keep mine shorter to keep peoples interest; and plus they're more likely to read it in more detail, but I will take what you said into account and try to make some chapters longer where I can.

Thanks for commenting :D

[mjacton]

Well, it's entirely selfish on my part to want longer chapters. If a fic is good, I enjoy long chapters. But, as I said, you may not want to overload us with layers of angst.

Re: !!

[chewinggum20]

Thank you :D

[revanstar]

holy crap... poor Rachel. Thank you.

[chewinggum20]

I know poor Rachel, bless her :) why are you thanking me?? lol I should thank you for taking the time to comment :)

[revanstar]

I thank you for taking the time to write. And your welcome for the comment.

[motylik]

I really think you should continue. I do think it's a sensitive subject but I do think you can do it well, as you have done in Consequences. I for one would like to read how you continue this. Poor Rachel. :(

[chewinggum20]

aww thanks, im really glad you're all being positive and saying I should continue because I plan on focusing a majority of the story on Quinn and Rachel but Cancer will be the sub-plot. I have some really good idea's that if I can manage to do right will be really heart breakingly sweet... :D

Thanks for commenting

[0_0_loki_0_0]

Continue, please. It's has a nice set-up and it'll be interesting in where you take this angle.