Really sweet manip!! Lov the grin on Edward's face. Also considering where he placed his hand, he knows what he is doing and where this dance might lead them to ;-p
My first thought upon seeing the manip was; "snickers* Edward's groping Jacob.
xP I know, I know, I'm a dork. The simplest things amuse me, really.
Once again you did a lovely job with this manip. I love that you kept the canon height difference between the two (the movies didn't even do that >>). I'm loving the build up as well. Most authors would have the two jump in bed with each other after the 'I love you's' were said, but I'm glad to see that you didn't.
I can feel the sexual tension between the two. I can feel the want of a kiss, but the hesitance in getting one because they know they wouldn't be able to stop there. It's self control, man. :) Great job. As always. Can't wait to see more.
*Claps hands* yay for your fabulous feedback, and you're absolutely right about the groping part. Both Edward and Jacob are highly instinct-driven, and the sexual tension really is mounting. Considering just how delicious Jacob looks in those shorts (and hence the reference to his briefs in the ficlet) Edward is more than a little excited at the prospect of exploration. And besides, given how firm Jacob is all over, it must feel pretty awesome to hold where Edward is holding, hehe.
I'm glad you appreciate the canon height, because the movies don't maintain it, it can be difficult sometimes to get it right in the manips, so I'm glad it's being recognised.
And I'm so glad you're feeling the sexual tension build up, that's my plan, by the time they jump into bed together it'll be explosive ;o).
I have to giggle a little immaturely at the placement of Edward's hands. But aside from that - your manips are always so flippin amazing! I absolutely love love love the story that you do along with the pictures. It makes the pictures a thousand times more amazing. And they're pretty amazing, as I said :)
Hehe, yeah, he is a little frisky in it isn't he? Thanks so much, I'm thrilled you're enjoying the story, and that you think it makes the manips better *blush*. Lots more to come.
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xP I know, I know, I'm a dork. The simplest things amuse me, really.
Once again you did a lovely job with this manip. I love that you kept the canon height difference between the two (the movies didn't even do that >>). I'm loving the build up as well. Most authors would have the two jump in bed with each other after the 'I love you's' were said, but I'm glad to see that you didn't.
I can feel the sexual tension between the two. I can feel the want of a kiss, but the hesitance in getting one because they know they wouldn't be able to stop there. It's self control, man. :) Great job. As always. Can't wait to see more.
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I'm glad you appreciate the canon height, because the movies don't maintain it, it can be difficult sometimes to get it right in the manips, so I'm glad it's being recognised.
And I'm so glad you're feeling the sexual tension build up, that's my plan, by the time they jump into bed together it'll be explosive ;o).
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LOVED IT
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But aside from that - your manips are always so flippin amazing! I absolutely love love love the story that you do along with the pictures. It makes the pictures a thousand times more amazing. And they're pretty amazing, as I said :)
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