I would've commented MUCH sooner, but you see, I was away on family business. Kids can't watch themselves and all that. xP
Great continuation, though it made me want to kick Edward in the head (risking the broken foot and all). When will that dork learn to just do for himself instead of others. He can't make other people happy until he can make himself happy.
*siiiiigh*
Silly boy.
FYI (here's the dork in me, watch out) - Edward's 6'1 in the series and Jacob's 6'5.
Haha, no worries, thank you so much for the detailed comment (I love the feedback). Yeah, totally agree about Edward (he's not much better in the next part either). So true though, he needs to learn to love himself me thinks.
Awesome, thanks so much for clearing up the height, in that case, my proportions are almost right, almost *gets out measuring tape*, and I will amend the notes accordingly, and credit your genius of course, how nice it is to have friends with knowledge of the details :o).
So...why did you just make me squeal like a 14 year old girl? Hmmmm - not a flattering sound. However, Thanks for creating this. I love it (and don't think it's any more strange than the fact that I'm reviewing manips of 'Twilight'. Ha ha.
*blushes* Again, thank you. I do put a lot of thought into setting, context and content. So it's really nice to hear you say that ... and yes, the hand holding felt significant here, and I liked being able to explore obligations as well.
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Great continuation, though it made me want to kick Edward in the head (risking the broken foot and all). When will that dork learn to just do for himself instead of others. He can't make other people happy until he can make himself happy.
*siiiiigh*
Silly boy.
FYI (here's the dork in me, watch out) - Edward's 6'1 in the series and Jacob's 6'5.
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Awesome, thanks so much for clearing up the height, in that case, my proportions are almost right, almost *gets out measuring tape*, and I will amend the notes accordingly, and credit your genius of course, how nice it is to have friends with knowledge of the details :o).
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The character bios on Twilight Lexicon were interesting, same with the interviews with SM. That's where I got a lot of my information.
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PS. Loving your reviews, thanks so much.
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